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Farewell
I've said what I have come to say
And now there is nothing left to be said
Anything more would be meaningless
Words used become useless
The point has been made
My time here is over
Oblivion lies beyond our last breath
Oblivion exists beyond existence
We are all Self-mutilators
We are all Sadomasochists
We live to inflict pain on others
Or to have pain inflicted on us
Life is hell
Yet we cling to it for dear life
I once feared losing my consciousness
But now I beg for it
Zero consciousness awaits
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ENDE REIHENFOLGE : ZERO CONSCIOUSNESS

Contributed by Onslaught on Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 05:42:19 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

Now I am done
Farewell
I've said what I have come to say
And now there is nothing left to be said
Anything more would be meaningless
Words used become useless
The point has been made
My time here is over
Oblivion lies beyond our last breath
Oblivion exists beyond existence
We are all Self-mutilators
We are all Sadomasochists
We live to inflict pain on others
Or to have pain inflicted on us
Life is hell
Yet we cling to it for dear life
I once feared losing my consciousness
But now I beg for it
Zero consciousness awaits
Death is freedom

Copyright © Onslaught ... [ 2004-11-14 17:42:19]
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Re: ENDE REIHENFOLGE : ZERO CONSCIOUSNESS (User Rating: 1 )
by surge_joebot on Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 05:49:07 PM AEST
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that is a freakishly good poem, sooo sad, so true, so pure yet disgusting (in a good way) I was honestly shocked by it, well done, very powerful
cheers
demelza

Re: ENDE REIHENFOLGE : ZERO CONSCIOUSNESS (User Rating: 1 )
by kyletycz on Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 07:31:32 PM AEST
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Awsome write, i liked it very much,
on another note, what language is that for the title, from my limited knowledge of anything, i thought it was german

l8r

Ninja Tycz

Re: ENDE REIHENFOLGE : ZERO CONSCIOUSNESS (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 09:40:44 PM AEST
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Your German in your poems always catches my eye ! Since my families German & i can speak it a little bit! This was wonderful write I hope your not leaving! CHristina

Re: ENDE REIHENFOLGE : ZERO CONSCIOUSNESS (User Rating: 1 )
by Onslaught on Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 09:57:43 PM AEST
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I am not leaving, however, I have nothing more to write. I have come to the end of the road. I have found my answer.

Re: ENDE REIHENFOLGE : ZERO CONSCIOUSNESS (User Rating: 1 )
by assassinatorgirl on Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 08:32:43 PM AEST
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ooh perfectly true! you are an awesome poet you convey such feeling and truth in your poems they are so deep. You are so much like me I love you in a friendly way!

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