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Array ( [sid] => 71299 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => the universe in a split second [time] => 2004-11-13 00:24:28 [hometext] => [bodytext] => trenches run red with blood
patriotism digested like quaaludes
there is no winner here
except for those who flourish on agony

return to your corners
and vomit those false ideals into a pail
(round 2)
(round 3)
(round 100)

empty clips at a mindless clone
spill their blood
they are weaker than you
they are weaker than all of us
shed your regrets
kill all you can
don't worry about your victims
worry about the survivors
only long enough to put a bullet between their brown eyes
another notch and it's in the past

you have a choice
if you live to make one. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 184 [topic] => 13 [informant] => summers [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

the universe in a split second

Contributed by summers on Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 12:24:28 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

trenches run red with blood
patriotism digested like quaaludes
there is no winner here
except for those who flourish on agony

return to your corners
and vomit those false ideals into a pail
(round 2)
(round 3)
(round 100)

empty clips at a mindless clone
spill their blood
they are weaker than you
they are weaker than all of us
shed your regrets
kill all you can
don't worry about your victims
worry about the survivors
only long enough to put a bullet between their brown eyes
another notch and it's in the past

you have a choice
if you live to make one.

Copyright © summers ... [ 2004-11-13 00:24:28]
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Re: the universe in a split second (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 01:01:08 AM AEST
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wow, i love this!!! well done!

Re: the universe in a split second (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 01:08:50 AM AEST
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WOW MAN that one slapped me right in the face. Good powerful write. War sucks!. Much peace to you.

Re: the universe in a split second (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 04:45:39 PM AEST
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What Hippienurse said, but with more feeling.

I must quote you on this one;

"there is no winner here
except for those who flourish on agony"

I actually gawped and read it back. Cool.
Keep writing.

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