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We can hear their cries in our sleep,
It is a beautiful sound so softly spoken,
Never a single note can ever be broken.

As you awake you walk over to the window,
Their cry carries such a gentle flow,
You feel yourself drifting into the sky,
All the while hearing their cry.

Your whole body begins to fall,
As you listen to their angelic call,
You float as if you were as light as air,
Not feeling like your body is really there.

You travel slowly towards a bright light,
You can see silhouettes dressed in white,
On their backs are the most delicate of wings,
You feel under a spell as you hear them sing.

Right before your eyes the angels dance,
All the while watching you’re in a sleepy trance,
All this beauty you feel it must be a dream,
You wonder are things really as perfect as they seem?

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As The Angels Weep

Contributed by pixie on Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 12:19:04 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

As the heavenly angels weep,
We can hear their cries in our sleep,
It is a beautiful sound so softly spoken,
Never a single note can ever be broken.

As you awake you walk over to the window,
Their cry carries such a gentle flow,
You feel yourself drifting into the sky,
All the while hearing their cry.

Your whole body begins to fall,
As you listen to their angelic call,
You float as if you were as light as air,
Not feeling like your body is really there.

You travel slowly towards a bright light,
You can see silhouettes dressed in white,
On their backs are the most delicate of wings,
You feel under a spell as you hear them sing.

Right before your eyes the angels dance,
All the while watching you’re in a sleepy trance,
All this beauty you feel it must be a dream,
You wonder are things really as perfect as they seem?

Copyright Â© pixie ... [ 2004-11-11 12:19:04]
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Re: As The Angels Weep (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 12:25:59 PM AEST
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aww this is a beatiful poem.. it gives you that warm feeling inside .. angels are wondeful watching over us.. this sends a good messege awesome write

Peace and hope
JENNI

Re: As The Angels Weep (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 12:33:27 PM AEST
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Lovely poem, Krissy. Sadly, I have never heard heavenly angel weep. But I have heard earthy angels weep and they are sounds I still hear in my head a times when reminded of those angels and the reasons they did weep. You have a beautiful heart, my sweet, keep it open.

Hugs,
Rita

Re: As The Angels Weep (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 12:40:41 PM AEST
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Pixie that was so beautiful I loved it.
Things are never perfect but if you see such beauty your heart is kind for sure!

Lots of love on your birthday a manchester girl like myself

Lots of love Sweetangelukxxxx

Re: As The Angels Weep (User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 12:52:52 PM AEST
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I wonder what angels think when they see us in such misery and so sad..surely they do weep then..such a pretty poem my pixie..loved it.

Re: As The Angels Weep (User Rating: 1 )
by LEMMEN on Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 02:05:31 PM AEST
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"TRUELY A GREAT WRITE" Very lovely poem.

~~DENNIS~~

Re: As The Angels Weep (User Rating: 1 )
by pander on Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 10:08:21 AM AEST
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Another nice write. This time a bit different in style to normal.

Well done! You've pulled off this style change brilliantly Pixie.

Luv,

Pander
xxxx

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