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Array ( [sid] => 71036 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => PEACE [time] => 2004-11-11 04:28:16 [hometext] => i felt emotional when i read about 2nd world war during my 10th class days.I have put all my feelings on paper and the result is this poem. [bodytext] => Peace,Peace,Peace!
Everyone in the creation,
Talks about this peace,
Having no commitment to put into action.

Man is living without quiet,
And has tension in his heart,
How can he achieve challenge of quiet.
When all the lethal weapons are salient?

Commotions between countries,
And countries,races ,
And races,faces
And faces.........

Root cause for this non-truce,
Is envious,spurious,
Covetous,dolorous ,
Kind of circumstance.

Sayeth one ignorants say,
"We need to protect our country,
From enemy sphere"
But war is not the only way.

Had Jahangir Bhaba anticipated
That nuclear energy would lead,
To disastrous nuclear bomb,
Would nucleus in an atom be discovered?

Mutual understanding,co-operation,
Are modes to create peace action,
Treat this existence with unison and syncopation,
To charm it like presentation. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 162 [topic] => 57 [informant] => snigdha [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => war )

PEACE

Contributed by snigdha on Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 04:28:16 AM in AEST
Topic: war

Peace,Peace,Peace!
Everyone in the creation,
Talks about this peace,
Having no commitment to put into action.

Man is living without quiet,
And has tension in his heart,
How can he achieve challenge of quiet.
When all the lethal weapons are salient?

Commotions between countries,
And countries,races ,
And races,faces
And faces.........

Root cause for this non-truce,
Is envious,spurious,
Covetous,dolorous ,
Kind of circumstance.

Sayeth one ignorants say,
"We need to protect our country,
From enemy sphere"
But war is not the only way.

Had Jahangir Bhaba anticipated
That nuclear energy would lead,
To disastrous nuclear bomb,
Would nucleus in an atom be discovered?

Mutual understanding,co-operation,
Are modes to create peace action,
Treat this existence with unison and syncopation,
To charm it like presentation.

Copyright © snigdha ... [ 2004-11-11 04:28:16]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: PEACE (User Rating: 1 )
by girish on Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 06:47:54 AM AEST
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dear friend, i was feeling happy to go through your poem. i have written a similar piece with the same title and i have posted this even in poetry.com when the WTC building collapsed asa sympathy poem. i have even published this same poem in this site too since poetry.com have removed the names of India and Pakistan after the kargil war. read my poem and comment on that too. i have written more than one poem on the same subject.

girish

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