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From all the pain
From all the hurt
You can't contain

A troubled soul
That's torn apart
In sorrow beats
Your broken heart

The tears you shed
Each drop you cry
Each one was meant
For me to dry

Your sadness breaks
My heart in two
You cry, my Love
I'll cry with you

Your sorrow, pain
I'll help you bear
Your laughter too
I'll always share

I'll be here, Love
Arms open wide
When your heart needs me
By your side [comments] => 10 [counter] => 399 [topic] => 65 [informant] => wachumiri [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => toughstuff )

To Take You Away

Contributed by wachumiri on Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 01:36:52 AM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff

To take you away
From all the pain
From all the hurt
You can't contain

A troubled soul
That's torn apart
In sorrow beats
Your broken heart

The tears you shed
Each drop you cry
Each one was meant
For me to dry

Your sadness breaks
My heart in two
You cry, my Love
I'll cry with you

Your sorrow, pain
I'll help you bear
Your laughter too
I'll always share

I'll be here, Love
Arms open wide
When your heart needs me
By your side

Copyright © wachumiri ... [ 2004-11-10 01:36:52]
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Re: To Take You Away (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 02:08:01 AM AEST
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awesome i love it!!!

Re: To Take You Away (User Rating: 1 )
by justjonesy on Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 03:00:08 AM AEST
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Brings out all the right emotions....im sure it makes everyone feel of that one person they've loved the most

Re: To Take You Away (User Rating: 1 )
by AnastasiaN on Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 03:05:11 AM AEST
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this is a really touching poem, thanks for sharing...Anastasia

Re: To Take You Away (User Rating: 1 )
by Lovingangel4u on Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 05:54:33 AM AEST
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What beautiful words of love and committment. Im sure she will love them David.
Take Care
Lovingangel4u

Re: To Take You Away (User Rating: 1 )
by eatfresh22 on Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 09:38:59 AM AEST
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(She does love them!) I do love them. Thank you, David. You are very committed, and I appreciate that more than you know. I'm sorry for all that stuff....I wish she wouldn't be so reactive. But, this poem, which I'm supposed to be commenting on, is lovely. They rhythym has a nice, easy flow. Thank you for these kind, dedicated, loving words. Take care yourself there, kid. (Oh, and don't worry, I'm dedicated too)
~Carrie~

Re: To Take You Away (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 04:08:38 AM AEST
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Aye, nice piece. Don't make promises that aren't in your power to keep every time though, mate. It's too easy to do.

Tootles (tootles???)

Andrew

Re: To Take You Away (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 01:48:59 AM AEST
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a beautifully written piece.

Johnny.

Re: To Take You Away (User Rating: 1 )
by anitajames on Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 11:55:17 AM AEST
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Wow. This one takes my breath away.

Re: To Take You Away (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 07:24:38 PM AEST
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You never cease to amaze me David. The last few writes that I have read have simply left me speechless. A heavenly beautiful write. Not that I expected anything less from u. You've definately got urself a new fan.
Keep penning down those emotions David.
*hugs* from ur fan,
Sue

Re: To Take You Away (User Rating: 1 )
by hopelezz on Tuesday, 17th November 2009 @ 11:16:17 PM AEST
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wow.. a touching poem..

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