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of that past moment
that still I feel,
vivid,
burning upon my skin,
is the endless astonishment
that your gesture
caused,
and the sudden mess
that your kiss
brought
in my young life.
In my small world,
in my gipsy heart,
that moment is close,
that moment is far. [comments] => 7 [counter] => 219 [topic] => 24 [informant] => LostDream [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )

That moment

Contributed by LostDream on Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 11:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

The unchanged beauty
of that past moment
that still I feel,
vivid,
burning upon my skin,
is the endless astonishment
that your gesture
caused,
and the sudden mess
that your kiss
brought
in my young life.
In my small world,
in my gipsy heart,
that moment is close,
that moment is far.

Copyright Â© LostDream ... [ 2002-11-20 11:20:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: That moment (User Rating: 1 )
by Ronald on Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 11:35:26 AM AEST
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Very nice poem and... very nostalgic. Good!

Re: That moment (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 12:06:00 PM AEST
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I liked this peice a lot,good write! Christina

Re: That moment (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 01:40:11 PM AEST
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Such deep words in such a
short write, i really liked this one
Thanks for sharing
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.

Re: That moment (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 02:28:48 PM AEST
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Beautiful poem ... says so much.

Re: That moment (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 01:03:52 AM AEST
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So much said in so few words... love this write..
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my earlier posts...
Jenni

Re: That moment (User Rating: 1 )
by GEQUETSCHT on Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 08:26:09 AM AEST
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Das shonste Gedicht, gute Arbeit.

loved it.

Ali

Re: That moment (User Rating: 1 )
by TiNyOnE on Friday, 22nd November 2002 @ 08:04:04 AM AEST
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i love you poem, i sooo can relate to it. ive tried a million times to write about my first love that i had at such a young age, and its like a have writers block on that topic cuz theres too much emotions. but your poem discribed it perfect, good write! keep em, coming

Laura
aka.. Tiny

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