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Array ( [sid] => 69783 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Just Once More [time] => 2004-11-02 03:20:10 [hometext] => when you get lower than ever before.. what is there to do?? [bodytext] => Can't make logic,
Things aren't supposed to end this way
What about the way you used to love me
What happened to wanting more?
The sweetness is no where in your voice
Only those cold stares that could keep me
With constant nightmares
How about that gentle touch
That caressed me into an unknowing comfort zone?
Those sexy kisses that tease me with more
Slap me in the face with the boundaries we share
Burn away the internal sickness
Mend me from within my thoughts
Tell me how to feel
Got me planned out like a story that never ends
Revive me from the frozen state
Which I seem to be stuck in
Lower my stairway to heaven,
Let me come to peace a few years early
I beg of you to sacrifice my world
Which I've become so lost in
Hold me close and break free form the delusions all around
This two way mirror
Has told lies and deceived upon me
The reflection I see has become
Like a strung out descendant of the woman I wanted to be
Kill me now, spare me the *****
I want to ***** the emptiness inside my hazy dreams
Must be everything I expected to never come along
Know yourself and prepare for things you might do wrong
You only drown yourself with your fake help me calls
Push me underneath the water
Watch me burn into a nothingness
That I pray for my own sake
***** me baby, just once more
How I yearn to feel emotions from your lovingness
Might as well hold my breathe
Never know if I'll be able to slip my way
into the reaper's hands
I beg of you to pray for my end
Can't live for love when I'd love to live
Just take this,
Everything,
And ***** it all away
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 175 [topic] => 36 [informant] => Fairy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
Just Once More

Contributed by Fairy on Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 03:20:10 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



Can't make logic,
Things aren't supposed to end this way
What about the way you used to love me
What happened to wanting more?
The sweetness is no where in your voice
Only those cold stares that could keep me
With constant nightmares
How about that gentle touch
That caressed me into an unknowing comfort zone?
Those sexy kisses that tease me with more
Slap me in the face with the boundaries we share
Burn away the internal sickness
Mend me from within my thoughts
Tell me how to feel
Got me planned out like a story that never ends
Revive me from the frozen state
Which I seem to be stuck in
Lower my stairway to heaven,
Let me come to peace a few years early
I beg of you to sacrifice my world
Which I've become so lost in
Hold me close and break free form the delusions all around
This two way mirror
Has told lies and deceived upon me
The reflection I see has become
Like a strung out descendant of the woman I wanted to be
Kill me now, spare me the *****
I want to ***** the emptiness inside my hazy dreams
Must be everything I expected to never come along
Know yourself and prepare for things you might do wrong
You only drown yourself with your fake help me calls
Push me underneath the water
Watch me burn into a nothingness
That I pray for my own sake
***** me baby, just once more
How I yearn to feel emotions from your lovingness
Might as well hold my breathe
Never know if I'll be able to slip my way
into the reaper's hands
I beg of you to pray for my end
Can't live for love when I'd love to live
Just take this,
Everything,
And ***** it all away




Copyright © Fairy ... [ 2004-11-02 03:20:10]
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Re: Just Once More (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 06:55:38 AM AEST
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i hope that one day you can overcome this this write screams pain and hurt, keep strong by writing your feelings down,
takecare

pixie xx




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