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Array ( [sid] => 69777 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => This Night [time] => 2004-11-02 00:54:54 [hometext] => I wrote this after i figured out my fiance had cheated on me [bodytext] => This Night

I gave u my heart and soul
I gave u my all
And with that what did u do
U took it from me

U took my world away
Ripped my heart out of my body
And for what?

A kiss from an old flame
that’s what we were worth to you
We worth nothing to you

And in the end my accusations were right
You said they were wrong and u always had to fight
You always lied u never told the truth

So on this night
It all will end with my life [comments] => 3 [counter] => 153 [topic] => 13 [informant] => evilkitty [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

This Night

Contributed by evilkitty on Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 12:54:54 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

This Night

I gave u my heart and soul
I gave u my all
And with that what did u do
U took it from me

U took my world away
Ripped my heart out of my body
And for what?

A kiss from an old flame
that’s what we were worth to you
We worth nothing to you

And in the end my accusations were right
You said they were wrong and u always had to fight
You always lied u never told the truth

So on this night
It all will end with my life

Copyright Â© evilkitty ... [ 2004-11-02 00:54:54]
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Re: This Night (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 01:16:55 AM AEST
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Aww im so sorry about what your fiance did to you, i dont know exactly what to say to make you feel better but i hope you do find that guy who will treat and love you right.

Hugs,
Jane

Re: This Night (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 07:02:08 AM AEST
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i hope you can get over this heartache, keep writing, try and keep strong, easier said than done,a very deep and sad write,

pixie xx

Re: This Night (User Rating: 1 )
by evilkitty on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 09:07:15 PM AEST
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its the writer here.....im still not sure if he cheated....a "friend" of his said he did but he says he didnt so ya.

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