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Array ( [sid] => 69720 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Music [time] => 2004-11-01 17:27:49 [hometext] => I got a concert tonight ... my 1st hoir oncrt EVER, lol... just some thoughts before I go on [bodytext] => My stance
Smile
Emotions high
With all my friends around

From tall
Way short
And all between
And now there is no sound

He stands so still
So tall
And proud
And then his arms float up

They sway
At first
Then wave around
As all the suspense builds

Then..... wow
We sing
Our pitches match
All voices sound as one

Now WE
WE stand
So tall and proud
And sing for all we got

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Music

Contributed by lifefliesby on Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 05:27:49 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

My stance
Smile
Emotions high
With all my friends around

From tall
Way short
And all between
And now there is no sound

He stands so still
So tall
And proud
And then his arms float up

They sway
At first
Then wave around
As all the suspense builds

Then..... wow
We sing
Our pitches match
All voices sound as one

Now WE
WE stand
So tall and proud
And sing for all we got

*I love you guys. I love you Chels. I love you Dad. Thank you all*

Copyright © lifefliesby ... [ 2004-11-01 17:27:49]
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Re: Music (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 07:12:21 PM AEST
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great poem. Have fun at the concert don't stay up to late. You'll need some aspirin after cause you'll have a music handover.

Re: Music (User Rating: 1 )
by liquidsunshine on Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 08:54:27 PM AEST
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I love you, sweetie.

And to think, I'M the one who lit the fire under your a*s and got you in there.

You were great.

Amazing.

I had goosebumps.

Love

Forever and for always,

Chelsea

Re: Music (User Rating: 1 )
by DaveXerox on Thursday, 26th April 2007 @ 10:07:03 PM AEST
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There's nothing quite like the rush that comes from performing in front of an audience, especially when they applaud. I haven't yet tried to encapsulate that feeling in a poem but you may just have inspired me to do so. Well written!

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