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Array ( [sid] => 69467 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Insted of dying risk it all... [time] => 2004-10-30 16:15:31 [hometext] => something that came to me...I love it...hopefully you will too [bodytext] => Every night sitting in the dark you will cry,
looking into the sky you will begin to ask why,
every night you will be put in a battle field,
even after realizing there is nothing to yield.

There will be many ways for you to walk through,
but you will not know which one is for you,
No where to go,you will be stranded alone,
this is one journey you have to walk on your own.

The pain will not wait,even it will come soon,
feeding ur heart with its venom-spoon by spoon,
even if your heart can't take it any more,
it will not leave until it reaches the core.

Deep inside ur heart,you'll start thinking of dying,
to escape from the pain and stop all the crying,
Suicide may be one of the options you might try,
but soon u'll realize this is not the way to die.

No matter how beautiful love looks from outside,
like the rose there will always be a thorn beside,
making you to realize everything comes at a cost,
if u can afford,you can have me or else get lost.

Love is not a story to understand as you read,
it is an experience where only life can lead,
These things will happen if in love you fall,
If you are ready,you can love Risking It All.
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Insted of dying risk it all...

Contributed by LIving_In_My_Dream on Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 04:15:31 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Every night sitting in the dark you will cry,
looking into the sky you will begin to ask why,
every night you will be put in a battle field,
even after realizing there is nothing to yield.

There will be many ways for you to walk through,
but you will not know which one is for you,
No where to go,you will be stranded alone,
this is one journey you have to walk on your own.

The pain will not wait,even it will come soon,
feeding ur heart with its venom-spoon by spoon,
even if your heart can't take it any more,
it will not leave until it reaches the core.

Deep inside ur heart,you'll start thinking of dying,
to escape from the pain and stop all the crying,
Suicide may be one of the options you might try,
but soon u'll realize this is not the way to die.

No matter how beautiful love looks from outside,
like the rose there will always be a thorn beside,
making you to realize everything comes at a cost,
if u can afford,you can have me or else get lost.

Love is not a story to understand as you read,
it is an experience where only life can lead,
These things will happen if in love you fall,
If you are ready,you can love Risking It All.




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Re: Insted of dying risk it all... (User Rating: 1 )
by highly_flammable on Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 04:20:04 PM AEST
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this is an awesome poem. you do have a knack for writing. its very well written, and true, to the last word. great job


Re: Insted of dying risk it all... (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 06:51:04 AM AEST
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Cool poem




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