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Array ( [sid] => 69158 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Perfect [time] => 2004-10-28 00:25:03 [hometext] => i wrote this when i was mad at my parents, and its all true [bodytext] => I cannot be who you i am not
It seems like i'm just a dot,
In this world
Because no one understands
me,
And no one knows what it feels
Like to have someone make fun of you in everyway
I wish it would stop day after day,

No one knows what it feels like to be me
Sometimes i wish i could just flee,
And just runaway from all the pain
But no matter where i go,
It always seems to find me
Why won't you let me be,

I guess i didn't turn out like you'd hope
It's been so hard for me to cope,
Sometimes i don't know what i do wrong
I was only trying to help,
But no matter what i do its never good enough for you,
Sometimes your answers aren't clear
I wish i could find a way to disappear
Just so i could get away from here,

I guess the reason you yell at me,
Is because you won't me to be you
But you know thats its not coming true,
You can't stand who i am
But you know you can't change me,
You know thats true
I guess thats why you alwas make me feel soblue,

I tried to make you proud
I really did
But it was hard on a little kid,
I had to change in every way
I know my life will never be the same,
I had to grow up so fast
I never knew life was a blast,

Why did you leave mom?
You could've waited til things got calm,
I can't believe what you did,
I felt so alone
With you never home,

I guess i'm not what you hoped
And not what you pictured in your dreams
I think i know what this life means,
I know i'm not perfect,
But i tried my hardest to be
believe me,
But all i want to do is be me. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 188 [topic] => 48 [informant] => happybunnyfan [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Perfect

Contributed by happybunnyfan on Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 12:25:03 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



I cannot be who you i am not
It seems like i'm just a dot,
In this world
Because no one understands
me,
And no one knows what it feels
Like to have someone make fun of you in everyway
I wish it would stop day after day,

No one knows what it feels like to be me
Sometimes i wish i could just flee,
And just runaway from all the pain
But no matter where i go,
It always seems to find me
Why won't you let me be,

I guess i didn't turn out like you'd hope
It's been so hard for me to cope,
Sometimes i don't know what i do wrong
I was only trying to help,
But no matter what i do its never good enough for you,
Sometimes your answers aren't clear
I wish i could find a way to disappear
Just so i could get away from here,

I guess the reason you yell at me,
Is because you won't me to be you
But you know thats its not coming true,
You can't stand who i am
But you know you can't change me,
You know thats true
I guess thats why you alwas make me feel soblue,

I tried to make you proud
I really did
But it was hard on a little kid,
I had to change in every way
I know my life will never be the same,
I had to grow up so fast
I never knew life was a blast,

Why did you leave mom?
You could've waited til things got calm,
I can't believe what you did,
I felt so alone
With you never home,

I guess i'm not what you hoped
And not what you pictured in your dreams
I think i know what this life means,
I know i'm not perfect,
But i tried my hardest to be
believe me,
But all i want to do is be me.




Copyright © happybunnyfan ... [ 2004-10-28 00:25:03]
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Re: Perfect (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 12:36:00 AM AEST
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Wow u did a great job writing your feelings and venting.
This is very sad but it's a great write.
A masterpeice of what so many children have ti endure in life.
Hang tuff, freid.
U r a ver talented writer.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy


Re: Perfect (User Rating: 1 )
by BrandySwanson on Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 12:43:06 AM AEST
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I enjoyed this it showed alot of emotional feeling's that almost every kid {not all but some} has been through at one point in their lifes with their parents. Well written great job

Brandy


Re: Perfect (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 04:38:58 PM AEST
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sounds a bit too familar to me.




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