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Array ( [sid] => 68317 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Tides [time] => 2004-10-21 04:26:42 [hometext] => A tide of emotions [bodytext] => Fingerlike streams
creeping higher
flood passive furrows
with desire.

Ripples caress
each eager form
promising
the coming storm.

Deeper yet
the tide incises
higher yet
it's body rises.

Waves of lusting
passion roar.
Pure white horses
pound the shore.

A consumation
by the sea
excites!...delights!
the estuary.

Then slowly, gently,
comes the ebb
tranquility
extends it's web.

Participants
a calmness feign...
until the flood tide
comes again. [comments] => 9 [counter] => 213 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Wrybod [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 16 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Tides

Contributed by Wrybod on Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 04:26:42 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Fingerlike streams
creeping higher
flood passive furrows
with desire.

Ripples caress
each eager form
promising
the coming storm.

Deeper yet
the tide incises
higher yet
it's body rises.

Waves of lusting
passion roar.
Pure white horses
pound the shore.

A consumation
by the sea
excites!...delights!
the estuary.

Then slowly, gently,
comes the ebb
tranquility
extends it's web.

Participants
a calmness feign...
until the flood tide
comes again.

Copyright © Wrybod ... [ 2004-10-21 04:26:42]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Tides (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 06:19:19 AM AEST
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emotional and written with beauty,

pixie xx

Re: Tides (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 06:40:17 AM AEST
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Wow had my style written all over this magnificent description of emotions

Love Sweetangelukxxx

Re: Tides (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 07:31:22 AM AEST
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Sensual and allegorical.

Well done.

Re: Tides (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 07:39:00 AM AEST
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Awsome write. Love the style and deep emotion. Can't wait to read your next.......Mike

Re: Tides (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 08:11:51 AM AEST
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A very impressive poem, well construed.

The tide goes out to sea, but it always flows back to the sand that calls it.

I say bring on the swell, that is what makes life interesting.

Good to see you writing agian.

Kie

Re: Tides (User Rating: 1 )
by Dawny on Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 09:34:27 AM AEST
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Wow!!!

This is so sensual and I love the vivid descriptions and imagery.

So glad your back baob, excellent poem

Love Dawny x

Re: Tides (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 03:15:01 AM AEST
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Very creative writing.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: Tides (User Rating: 1 )
by LadyDama on Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 11:50:22 AM AEST
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oh dear bob, my ever friend
i have come to read again
this new you a gentle wave
this treasure my heart shall save

much different from two years ago
beautiful in it's caressing flow...

michele

Re: Tides (User Rating: 1 )
by lillyjane on Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 01:09:06 PM AEST
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I could see the sea and tide ,felt as if I were there you describe it so well in a beautiful way.x

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