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Array ( [sid] => 68182 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => US [time] => 2004-10-20 08:43:28 [hometext] => A religious way to look at it.... [bodytext] => Please God give us patience
for what we all love to write
for holding our soft comfy hand
every day and every night.
Please Father don't let us shout
when something is wrong on our screen
it doesn't really matter
with Your guidence there is no need to make a scene.
Please God keep our smile
when times are really tough
help us keep batteling on
as life in your light should never be so rough.
Please Heavenly Father hold our thoughts
to be tender and so sweet
don't let our mind go ferral
so our lives can be our dream- complete.
Please God give us wisdom
for all things right and wrong
know that each day we'll grow
in you is where we belong.
Please Our Saviour keep this site going
for us all to read and submit
be inside all our hearts
please don't let us members split!

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US

Contributed by inoc on Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 08:43:28 AM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

Please God give us patience
for what we all love to write
for holding our soft comfy hand
every day and every night.
Please Father don't let us shout
when something is wrong on our screen
it doesn't really matter
with Your guidence there is no need to make a scene.
Please God keep our smile
when times are really tough
help us keep batteling on
as life in your light should never be so rough.
Please Heavenly Father hold our thoughts
to be tender and so sweet
don't let our mind go ferral
so our lives can be our dream- complete.
Please God give us wisdom
for all things right and wrong
know that each day we'll grow
in you is where we belong.
Please Our Saviour keep this site going
for us all to read and submit
be inside all our hearts
please don't let us members split!

Copyright © inoc ... [ 2004-10-20 08:43:28]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: US (User Rating: 1 )
by sandy_poetrygodslove on Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 08:58:20 AM AEST
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A very beautiful poem, what a nice prayer for the site to read and take a hold of, God answers prayers still today.. keeps me here.. read Isaiah 51.. the one he gave me... beautiful words you will read and be touched how he talks to you... take care.. great write.. love how you made it flow. THAT IS HIM WORKING IN YOU..

Re: US (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 09:48:25 AM AEST
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Heartfelt and honest with a smile at the end.
I enjoyed this.
Stitch

Re: US (User Rating: 1 )
by bernard on Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 11:56:26 AM AEST
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I will just say amen to this poem and 5/5 from bernard.

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