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Array ( [sid] => 68110 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => He Crushed Me [time] => 2004-10-19 19:00:20 [hometext] => [bodytext] => He cushed me
He told me he "just wanted to be friends"
We all know how that line is...
It means we're done
done forever and always
It crushed me to hear such words come out of his mouth
He said we'd be together forever and always
And now he doesn't want me
He wants another girl
He got her
And he crushed me.
He says he's happy with her
Was he never happy with me?
Was he playing games with my mind?
Feeding me bull***** lines?
He crushed me
He promised me so many things
Those things are gone
forever and always
gone
pushed back in my face
It hurts
Because I really did love him
I loved him with almost everything
I thought what he told me was true
But it wasn't
I knew it had to be too good to be true
But I wish it didn't end that way
I wish he wouldn't have crushed me so hard
But he did
He Crushed me
And he crushed me hard... [comments] => 3 [counter] => 168 [topic] => 24 [informant] => lovelyhatred08 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )

He Crushed Me

Contributed by lovelyhatred08 on Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 07:00:20 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

He cushed me
He told me he "just wanted to be friends"
We all know how that line is...
It means we're done
done forever and always
It crushed me to hear such words come out of his mouth
He said we'd be together forever and always
And now he doesn't want me
He wants another girl
He got her
And he crushed me.
He says he's happy with her
Was he never happy with me?
Was he playing games with my mind?
Feeding me bull***** lines?
He crushed me
He promised me so many things
Those things are gone
forever and always
gone
pushed back in my face
It hurts
Because I really did love him
I loved him with almost everything
I thought what he told me was true
But it wasn't
I knew it had to be too good to be true
But I wish it didn't end that way
I wish he wouldn't have crushed me so hard
But he did
He Crushed me
And he crushed me hard...

Copyright © lovelyhatred08 ... [ 2004-10-19 19:00:20]
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Re: He Crushed Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Sweetheart on Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 07:05:23 PM AEST
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I know how you feel, except I was the one who called it off. Now I am hurting so much. I wish I could give you some great advice, but I can't give myself any right now. I can't talk from experience, because he was my first love. I'm so sorry, but if it would help to know that someone else feels loves pain you should read my poem I just posted calle My pain, My loss. I hope things work out for you, I'm sure they will.

Re: He Crushed Me (User Rating: 1 )
by clotti on Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 12:59:40 PM AEST
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weeping for that is such a true and honest well writen poem. 5 weeks ago now my guy said to me 'maybe we should be friends' 5 little words so much impact. i am stil hurting so much he has a new girl who he will be going out with soon, it crushes me to see him each time, i only hope that one day i will love someone more than i did him, he ws my first and that really upsets me. i hope (for both our sakes) that with each passsing day it gets a little easier, for this pain hurts so much. smile again soon xxx

Re: He Crushed Me (User Rating: 1 )
by nikobellic on Tuesday, 27th May 2008 @ 01:18:15 PM AEST
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wow... your poetry sucks.

honestly, i think i'd rather drink my own ***** then read this again.

just stop.

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