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Array ( [sid] => 67817 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Us [time] => 2004-10-17 16:29:54 [hometext] => This is wrote by me and Snapz(mark). The bold lines are mine and the normal are his. It was an experiment i wanted to try as i have never wrote a poem with another person [bodytext] =>

I've lost the feeling in my bones from my head to my knees and all my toes,
I cannot carry on with these constant lows.
It’s just making my mind sore
And making my heart want you more,
By the time I see you I'll be blue,
I just hope we do not argue
Why would we still love, but now we wonder like lonely doves,
When apart we're as useful as separate gloves
Like a broken fly swatter trying to smash bugs
Your hugs are so much better than any drugs
Anyone not to fall in love with you are complete mugs
I've been such a fool to leave you
My coldness has made me feel like such a shoe, warn out and drawn out like my pain
Yet we drive each other insane
Arguments as regular as rain
Yet still we are strangely friends, which always make amends
And the hate I have bends n let’s u back in,
I am stupid and always causing far too much sin.
Just put your fears in a bin
If I cry will you hold me in your arms and keep me safe from my fears and wipe away my tears?
Do you need to ask,
So you're still up to the task
I always am, just as long as you want me around
Do you still like to hear my sound
Yeah and I hope it doesn’t cost pounds
We should draw this to and end, and start afresh in our friendship




[comments] => 4 [counter] => 181 [topic] => 43 [informant] => little_genna [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
Us

Contributed by little_genna on Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 04:29:54 PM in AEST
Topic: oops





I've lost the feeling in my bones from my head to my knees and all my toes,
I cannot carry on with these constant lows.
It’s just making my mind sore
And making my heart want you more,
By the time I see you I'll be blue,
I just hope we do not argue
Why would we still love, but now we wonder like lonely doves,
When apart we're as useful as separate gloves
Like a broken fly swatter trying to smash bugs
Your hugs are so much better than any drugs
Anyone not to fall in love with you are complete mugs
I've been such a fool to leave you
My coldness has made me feel like such a shoe, warn out and drawn out like my pain
Yet we drive each other insane
Arguments as regular as rain
Yet still we are strangely friends, which always make amends
And the hate I have bends n let’s u back in,
I am stupid and always causing far too much sin.
Just put your fears in a bin
If I cry will you hold me in your arms and keep me safe from my fears and wipe away my tears?
Do you need to ask,
So you're still up to the task
I always am, just as long as you want me around
Do you still like to hear my sound
Yeah and I hope it doesn’t cost pounds
We should draw this to and end, and start afresh in our friendship








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Re: Us (User Rating: 1 )
by Deleterious_Dislike on Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 04:35:16 PM AEST
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The bold made that hard for me to read
maybe it's my eyes
it was good


Re: Us (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 07:03:42 PM AEST
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If this gave you both as much pleasure as collaborating does me, then go for it!! It was lovely.....
Jenni


Re: Us (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 10:54:03 AM AEST
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a very good write from the two of you,

takecare
pixie xx


Re: Us (User Rating: 1 )
by shadows on Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 05:09:14 PM AEST
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Sine giid metaphors and alot of the poems true to a lot, well done.




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