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Array ( [sid] => 67767 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Why do you still love her? [time] => 2004-10-17 06:58:54 [hometext] => this was written about a guy who still loves my girl, even though she only loves him as mate and he knows this [bodytext] => stop your love for her.
its time to let go,
look to the future,
she did you so wrong
you were so vunerable
how can you possible ever love again?
she destroyed you but you cant see it,
every other girl can not compare to her,
why is she still the one that holds your heart?
she had hold of you for so long.
let her go, walk out of her life,
you deserve more.
please don't get hurt again,
it tore you apart, still does, the slut
take it back
give your heart so someone else,
and they will love you back
remeber that feeling?
feel it again
reclaim your heart [comments] => 2 [counter] => 152 [topic] => 22 [informant] => clotti [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Why do you still love her?

Contributed by clotti on Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 06:58:54 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

stop your love for her.
its time to let go,
look to the future,
she did you so wrong
you were so vunerable
how can you possible ever love again?
she destroyed you but you cant see it,
every other girl can not compare to her,
why is she still the one that holds your heart?
she had hold of you for so long.
let her go, walk out of her life,
you deserve more.
please don't get hurt again,
it tore you apart, still does, the slut
take it back
give your heart so someone else,
and they will love you back
remeber that feeling?
feel it again
reclaim your heart

Copyright © clotti ... [ 2004-10-17 06:58:54]
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Re: Why do you still love her? (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 07:52:23 AM AEST
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I agree with what you are telling this man, but I am a bit confused. She is your girl, but you are taking his side and calling her a slut? Saying the no other girl can compare to her , then saying he deserves more... Maybe I am just reading it wrong..lol

In any case this is a strong write

Larry

Re: Why do you still love her? (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 12:00:18 PM AEST
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Im with Larry on this one im a little confused though it is a really gd write.

love
Gen xx

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