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Array ( [sid] => 67713 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Ritualistic Love [time] => 2004-10-16 17:50:45 [hometext] => im so happy these relationships exist, now i know what suicide means, and how to avoid it... thanks renee... this is about you [bodytext] => falling in love
and falling away
to the ends of the earth on this armagaedon day

finally true
the lies we have shared
and the murders we loved and the violence that cared

shotguns in mouths
triggers in hand
murdering suicide true love once again

the photos of wrists
bleeding through slits
that love has produced, those marvelous cuts of fire

the blood we drank
flowing from the wound
the death that we lived we'll love very soon

candles and angels
and candlight lies
its funny the way the way my heart bleeds and dies [comments] => 1 [counter] => 200 [topic] => 54 [informant] => abnormalpunk [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => happypoetry )

Ritualistic Love

Contributed by abnormalpunk on Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 05:50:45 PM in AEST
Topic: happypoetry

falling in love
and falling away
to the ends of the earth on this armagaedon day

finally true
the lies we have shared
and the murders we loved and the violence that cared

shotguns in mouths
triggers in hand
murdering suicide true love once again

the photos of wrists
bleeding through slits
that love has produced, those marvelous cuts of fire

the blood we drank
flowing from the wound
the death that we lived we'll love very soon

candles and angels
and candlight lies
its funny the way the way my heart bleeds and dies

Copyright © abnormalpunk ... [ 2004-10-16 17:50:45]
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Re: Ritualistic Love (User Rating: 1 )
by eyesxcriedxout1989 on Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 02:04:05 PM AEST
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That was a really awesome poem. Very good flow, word usage was excellent...thanks for sharing

Mason

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