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Array ( [sid] => 67560 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Don't I'm Tired [time] => 2004-10-15 14:13:46 [hometext] => Not what you may think! [bodytext] => Don't let me continue
On this toilet of self-pity
I'm tired
Of smelling so bad

Don't let me ride
The waves of self-doubt
I'm tired
Of questioning myself

Don't let me stew
In this pot of anger
I'm tired
Of wanting to fight everyone.

Don't let me wallow
In this pigsty of dishonesty
I'm tired
Of telling everyone I'm fine

Don't let me drown
In this ocean of guilt
I'm tired
Of carrying the load

Don't let me wade
In the river of tears
I'm tired
Of crying tears of blood

Don't let me sink
In shallow waters of mistrust
I'm tired
Of being alone

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Don't I'm Tired

Contributed by skyblumoon on Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 02:13:46 PM in AEST
Topic: didactic

Don't let me continue
On this toilet of self-pity
I'm tired
Of smelling so bad

Don't let me ride
The waves of self-doubt
I'm tired
Of questioning myself

Don't let me stew
In this pot of anger
I'm tired
Of wanting to fight everyone.

Don't let me wallow
In this pigsty of dishonesty
I'm tired
Of telling everyone I'm fine

Don't let me drown
In this ocean of guilt
I'm tired
Of carrying the load

Don't let me wade
In the river of tears
I'm tired
Of crying tears of blood

Don't let me sink
In shallow waters of mistrust
I'm tired
Of being alone

Copyright © skyblumoon ... [ 2004-10-15 14:13:46]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Don't I'm Tired (User Rating: 1 )
by Nazmythian on Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 02:41:50 PM AEST
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Absolutely Fantabulous !!! I'm tired too ...
I loved it !!!

Re: Don't I'm Tired (User Rating: 1 )
by izzy on Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 03:19:27 PM AEST
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It surely wasn't what I was thinking. This is really good. I feel the same way.
Izzy

Re: Don't I'm Tired (User Rating: 1 )
by littlelaura15 on Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 10:38:16 AM AEST
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This is a great poem and you should continue to write. Good description of your emotions and how you feel - something I can totally relate to.

Laura xxxx

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