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Array ( [sid] => 67327 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => These words [time] => 2004-10-13 21:13:57 [hometext] => im not to about this poem. but here it is anyways. [bodytext] => I see you everyday.But i still can't wait to see you the next day.
I get ***** off when you don't want to be with me. And you run
off with someone else. You don't seem to realize what my emotions show.
Or maybe you just don't care to know. You say i'm like a sister and nothing more.
I say ok and hang my head. You see me as a faithful friend and will always.
It hurts to know my life won't be lived with you. You want me to tell you
how i feel. It's not as easy as that. I know once i tell you the depth of my feeling
you will act different. I tell you i love you and its the truth. You tell me the same
but it has a different meaning. He hurt you again. You run to me. I tell you its his lose
But you still blame yourself. He doesn't treat you like he should. He seems to care more
for his wife. I know hes a good guy and he really does love you. I like him as a friend but
i hate him too.You wonder why i do what i do. Its cause i love you. I know it is nothing
but a friendship and cannot go any further. It hurts so bad to know but i still can't loose you.
I will stay by you till you tell me to leave. I know i hurt you and for that i have myself.
I will never forgive myself for making you cry. Thoughs are words i will never tell you. I'm
terrified of my feeling. I'm afraid of love. I don't want to hurt you anymore than i do. So to
your face i am your friend. But deep down i'm dieing because i can't tell you these words. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 144 [topic] => 48 [informant] => pyro_88 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
These words

Contributed by pyro_88 on Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 09:13:57 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



I see you everyday.But i still can't wait to see you the next day.
I get ***** off when you don't want to be with me. And you run
off with someone else. You don't seem to realize what my emotions show.
Or maybe you just don't care to know. You say i'm like a sister and nothing more.
I say ok and hang my head. You see me as a faithful friend and will always.
It hurts to know my life won't be lived with you. You want me to tell you
how i feel. It's not as easy as that. I know once i tell you the depth of my feeling
you will act different. I tell you i love you and its the truth. You tell me the same
but it has a different meaning. He hurt you again. You run to me. I tell you its his lose
But you still blame yourself. He doesn't treat you like he should. He seems to care more
for his wife. I know hes a good guy and he really does love you. I like him as a friend but
i hate him too.You wonder why i do what i do. Its cause i love you. I know it is nothing
but a friendship and cannot go any further. It hurts so bad to know but i still can't loose you.
I will stay by you till you tell me to leave. I know i hurt you and for that i have myself.
I will never forgive myself for making you cry. Thoughs are words i will never tell you. I'm
terrified of my feeling. I'm afraid of love. I don't want to hurt you anymore than i do. So to
your face i am your friend. But deep down i'm dieing because i can't tell you these words.




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Re: These words (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 09:21:36 PM AEST
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Very sad.

Spazzo


Re: These words (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 09:55:40 PM AEST
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powerful write. everything has a price. the price is usually pain, but people should be able to deal with it. being upfront saves a lot of heartache in the end.


Re: These words (User Rating: 1 )
by Jishes_4_ever on Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 10:42:08 PM AEST
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great write
it was sad and emotional
i liked it

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