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Array ( [sid] => 67279 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I may be a dreamer, but Love is no myth [time] => 2004-10-13 16:00:53 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I have no choice but to question
this quote of yours you call a suggestion
on how you feel about love,
although all you've done to it is shove,
it far away from your heart,
and thats why you're always so torn apart.

You say "love is a myth that dreamers share..."
How would you know about love if you've never been there?
When you say "....dreamers share with the outrageous hope..."
I guess I'm a dreamer although love makes me choke.

If you don't believe in love why does it hurt you so bad?
You speak of love as if it's just some ignorant fad.
"....that together they can defeat..." which is what they will do.
It's bound to happen, even to you.

However, I do understand what you mean,
this quote you use repetitively on love and how it seems,
to be this wonderful thing you can't seem to hold.
I'm not judging, I'm just simply being quite bold. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 176 [topic] => 56 [informant] => jessadawn [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => sarcasticpoetry )

I may be a dreamer, but Love is no myth

Contributed by jessadawn on Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 04:00:53 PM in AEST
Topic: sarcasticpoetry

I have no choice but to question
this quote of yours you call a suggestion
on how you feel about love,
although all you've done to it is shove,
it far away from your heart,
and thats why you're always so torn apart.

You say "love is a myth that dreamers share..."
How would you know about love if you've never been there?
When you say "....dreamers share with the outrageous hope..."
I guess I'm a dreamer although love makes me choke.

If you don't believe in love why does it hurt you so bad?
You speak of love as if it's just some ignorant fad.
"....that together they can defeat..." which is what they will do.
It's bound to happen, even to you.

However, I do understand what you mean,
this quote you use repetitively on love and how it seems,
to be this wonderful thing you can't seem to hold.
I'm not judging, I'm just simply being quite bold.

Copyright © jessadawn ... [ 2004-10-13 16:00:53]
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Re: I may be a dreamer, but Love is no myth (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 04:16:37 PM AEST
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excellent write.

Re: I may be a dreamer, but Love is no myth (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyaryssa on Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 04:31:49 PM AEST
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I do like the whole musing atmosphere... I wouldn't class it as sarcastic, but, it's your poem. The first verse is very irregular compared to the tightness of the other three (kudos for those, I have respect). Nice imagery. Overall, I like. :)

Re: I may be a dreamer, but Love is no myth (User Rating: 1 )
by jessadawn on Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 06:47:27 PM AEST
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while reading my poem...i saw that i totally left out the ending of the quote...which is "this chaos called life." My bad..lol. I guess i'll just have to rewrite this sometime, but I was kind of in a hurry. Oh well, keep the comments coming, and thank you for readin my poem!

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