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Array ( [sid] => 67229 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Hamlet's Dilemma [time] => 2004-10-13 09:51:44 [hometext] => [bodytext] => To love, or love with haste;
a simple, yet taunting riddle from Shakespeare
himself that turns my mind to waste.
With your implying eyes and sly lips
come a glow, a soft radiance near
the surface, like a lonely snowflake
that falls forever before disappearing.
Your gentle touch and melodious
voice keep me from fading into
the shadows; away from the void.
Posing a cool decorum with a teasing
smile relieves me from the grips of reality,
freeing me, inspiring my thoughts.
So i await with my feelings aside for
a chance to match your tenderness;
for as special things come in small packages,
with patience, all good things come in time.

-The Raven- [comments] => 3 [counter] => 212 [topic] => 2 [informant] => theraven [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Hamlet's Dilemma

Contributed by theraven on Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 09:51:44 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

To love, or love with haste;
a simple, yet taunting riddle from Shakespeare
himself that turns my mind to waste.
With your implying eyes and sly lips
come a glow, a soft radiance near
the surface, like a lonely snowflake
that falls forever before disappearing.
Your gentle touch and melodious
voice keep me from fading into
the shadows; away from the void.
Posing a cool decorum with a teasing
smile relieves me from the grips of reality,
freeing me, inspiring my thoughts.
So i await with my feelings aside for
a chance to match your tenderness;
for as special things come in small packages,
with patience, all good things come in time.

-The Raven-

Copyright © theraven ... [ 2004-10-13 09:51:44]
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Re: Hamlet's Dilemma (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 10:39:18 AM AEST
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a lovely write, very true the last line,

pixie xx

Re: Hamlet's Dilemma (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 04:25:01 PM AEST
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great write,i love this one

Re: Hamlet's Dilemma (User Rating: 1 )
by deadreckoning1983 on Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 02:50:05 AM AEST
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a very deep and pondering write, granted it's 3 am here. well raven old chap, i have to say i loved everything about this poem. you certainly know how to write excellent poetry!!!!!!! i am truly looking forward to becoming a loyal reader and fan of yours. peace and love,

theFlame

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