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Array ( [sid] => 66707 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Can Smell Your Fear [time] => 2004-10-09 11:50:45 [hometext] => It's as if depression has a sense of smell... [bodytext] => I can smell your sweet stench of fear,
Every time you sense me coming near,
I am in control of your inner most feelings,
I have the power to send your soul reeling.

Darkness & hate I go by many names,
I’ve hurt many, shot them down in flames,
But I have so much fun taunting you,
I love to torment & really put you through.

You are no match for my evil powers,
I will make you suffer by the hour,
Just when you think you have defeated me,
I invade your mind & your panic runs free.

With my touch I can make you blood chill,
I can make you want to grab a handful of pills,
You will never be free from my icy fingers,
I am a bad odour that forever over you lingers.

As you sit there clinging to sanity’s shreds,
Curled up in the foetal position in your bed,
I kick you I just love to hear your screams,
I laugh as your tears flow in dark streams.

I have made you a shell, made you so hollow,
Made you not want to face the world of tomorrow,
It isn’t you, but I who am in total control,
I am the keeper of your mind, body & now your soul.



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I Can Smell Your Fear

Contributed by pixie on Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 11:50:45 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



I can smell your sweet stench of fear,
Every time you sense me coming near,
I am in control of your inner most feelings,
I have the power to send your soul reeling.

Darkness & hate I go by many names,
I’ve hurt many, shot them down in flames,
But I have so much fun taunting you,
I love to torment & really put you through.

You are no match for my evil powers,
I will make you suffer by the hour,
Just when you think you have defeated me,
I invade your mind & your panic runs free.

With my touch I can make you blood chill,
I can make you want to grab a handful of pills,
You will never be free from my icy fingers,
I am a bad odour that forever over you lingers.

As you sit there clinging to sanity’s shreds,
Curled up in the foetal position in your bed,
I kick you I just love to hear your screams,
I laugh as your tears flow in dark streams.

I have made you a shell, made you so hollow,
Made you not want to face the world of tomorrow,
It isn’t you, but I who am in total control,
I am the keeper of your mind, body & now your soul.







Copyright © pixie ... [ 2004-10-09 11:50:45]
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Re: I Can Smell Your Fear (User Rating: 1 )
by Dorian on Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 11:57:29 AM AEST
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U go girl, tell it like it is, i know it and every other

guy better know it bravo pixie, a smahing poem,

* * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * ((((4 u))))

Dorian : )


Re: I Can Smell Your Fear (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 12:00:00 PM AEST
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ah yes another masterful innervision.....


Re: I Can Smell Your Fear (User Rating: 1 )
by katyqueen35 on Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 12:52:37 PM AEST
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Woa jaws drop to the floor.lol pixie dear where did that come from?lol
I sense that your very angry towards someone.awsome write.

hugs


Re: I Can Smell Your Fear (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 02:55:23 PM AEST
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i agree seems like anger, but a great read! strong words and a powerful flow. another great poem. A++++

I laugh as your tears flow in dark streams. i really liked this line... made me think


Re: I Can Smell Your Fear (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 12:59:46 AM AEST
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powerful write. excellent last stanza.


Re: I Can Smell Your Fear (User Rating: 1 )
by CrimsonTears on Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 10:28:51 PM AEST
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awesome poem...i loved it

Lots of Love
CrimsonTears




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