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[aid] => mick
[title] => My Scars Are My Own
[time] => 2004-10-09 09:48:33
[hometext] => Please read....I hope you like it....please comment!!
[bodytext] => The scars I have are all my own
The pain I felt could never be shown
So I took the pain from the inside out
All I wanted to do was shout
Now I love to see the scars
To me they’re just as beautiful as the stars
I try to keep this secret deep inside
But all the scars are getting hard to hide
No one understands my dark mind
Insanity is all that they find
I just can’t take the people here
They are the only thing I fear
My friends can’t help me, they just don’t understand
“Just stop right now,” they always command
I try to tell them its much too hard
My body is not the only thing scarred
My heart and mind are filled with pain
It feels as though I have been slain
Despair is all I’m left with in the end
Because the sharp razor blade is my best friend
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[ratings] => 2
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My Scars Are My Own
Contributed by
CrimsonTears
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Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 09:48:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
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The scars I have are all my own
The pain I felt could never be shown
So I took the pain from the inside out
All I wanted to do was shout
Now I love to see the scars
To me they’re just as beautiful as the stars
I try to keep this secret deep inside
But all the scars are getting hard to hide
No one understands my dark mind
Insanity is all that they find
I just can’t take the people here
They are the only thing I fear
My friends can’t help me, they just don’t understand
“Just stop right now,” they always command
I try to tell them its much too hard
My body is not the only thing scarred
My heart and mind are filled with pain
It feels as though I have been slain
Despair is all I’m left with in the end
Because the sharp razor blade is my best friend
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CrimsonTears
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2004-10-09 09:48:33]
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Re: My Scars Are My Own
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by ArdRi79 on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 10:03:39 AM AEST
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| The last line is great really gritty and sad and real, well written |
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Re: My Scars Are My Own
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by pixie on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 10:07:20 AM AEST
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wow, an amazing and deep write, I hope that one day your scars will be able to heal once and for all *hugs* others who dont do it themselves will never understand, my boyfriend cant get his head round it, a powerful write,
pixie xx |
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Re: My Scars Are My Own
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by Quilted_rag_doll on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 10:28:15 AM AEST
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*applause* very good write. i like how you keep the style goin,
and there are some very good lines in there. It also rings true,
for you and alot of people. great work!
¤~::.. a n d e ..::~¤ |
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Re: My Scars Are My Own
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 10:52:14 AM AEST
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| MAN do I ever know how you feel! I feel like this came out of my OWN journal! Great job expressing your emotion. I too live in a place where no one understands what it's like to cut. I gave up trying to hide the scars, and ppl don't even know what they're from. They always think it's fro fr***ing easy, "Just don't do it." *pfft* If they only knew. One time, one of my friends likened it to biting her fingernails. I got really ***** cuz it's nothing like that. If you wanna talk, I'm always listening. I've gone through the cutting thing (*clears throat* still am there) and the suicide bit. So if you wanna vent or just have a regular convo, I'm here for ya. Good luck! |
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Re: My Scars Are My Own
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by arden on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 11:22:28 AM AEST
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iv written many poems like this. i know the feelings and emotions going through you.
this was a very powerful write. it spoke loud volumes. and it brought alot of memorys back for me. awesome poem. very deep and meaningful. 5 stars.
keep it up.
Arden |
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Re: My Scars Are My Own
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 01:08:28 AM AEST
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| some things change, and some things never do. |
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Re: My Scars Are My Own
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by Hoots on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 04:58:45 PM AEST
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I completely understand. This is exactly my situation too. People just don't get why we do what we do. To us...the scars and cuts and blood is so enticingly beautiful. People just judge who ever they can without actually trying to understand them first. So if you ever need someone to talk to...I'd be more than happy to listen. Great poem...keep writing...your poetry will only get better and better.
Always,
Krystle |
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Re: My Scars Are My Own
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by EVERxSOxSWEET on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 02:36:14 PM AEST
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| i really really like this one.. I can relate to it so much..wonderful. =] |
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Re: My Scars Are My Own
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by assassinatorgirl on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 04:05:35 PM AEST
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| that's so sad, i feel that way too a lot. i don't cut, but i don't really care about myself so sometimes i just try to get in the way of things so i'll get a bruise or sumthin. this is a great poem a lot of emotion great job! |
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Re: My Scars Are My Own
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by Dri on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 11:12:29 PM AEST
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| i know how hard it is to stop... one of my friends swore she'd slap me next time i did it... very good, i love your last line, almost like you aren't afraid of what people will say and just admitting it... good job!! |
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