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watch your heart shatter, crumble
and allow the pieces to fall
without moving to gather them up-
piece them back together with glue
and wait for the next opportunity
to let them break apart once more-

Without sometimes-
You cant really say you ever lived
Without pieces-
You never learned to forgive.

But sometimes,
even sometimes-
still isn't enough.
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SoMeTiMeS PieCeS

Contributed by xSlashXPrettyXSkinx on Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 02:42:12 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Sometimes it's not enough to-
watch your heart shatter, crumble
and allow the pieces to fall
without moving to gather them up-
piece them back together with glue
and wait for the next opportunity
to let them break apart once more-

Without sometimes-
You cant really say you ever lived
Without pieces-
You never learned to forgive.

But sometimes,
even sometimes-
still isn't enough.

Copyright © xSlashXPrettyXSkinx ... [ 2004-10-09 02:42:12]
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Re: SoMeTiMeS PieCeS (User Rating: 1 )
by ArdRi79 on Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 10:13:19 AM AEST
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I think this is really deep and cathartic it could have used a better description but well done

Re: SoMeTiMeS PieCeS (User Rating: 1 )
by Clarity_Rising on Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 08:29:23 AM AEST
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I think you are too harsh on yourself if you think that is poem is "not even any good". I really liked it, keep up the great poems.

Re: SoMeTiMeS PieCeS (User Rating: 1 )
by justjonesy on Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 08:48:00 PM AEST
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i think it was very good....definately unique...which you need to serperate from all the other poetry on here...keep it up and just write whatever comes to your head

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