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Array ( [sid] => 66631 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Something Isn't Right [time] => 2004-10-08 18:12:21 [hometext] => ...Love's SO confusing sometimes... [bodytext] => Something isn't right
What could it be?
I should just be happy
Not full of misery

Something isn't right
It's tearing me apart
Could it be my family?
Or matters of the heart?

Something isn't right
Why is my mind so dim?
Shouldn't I be happy?
Shouldn't I think of him?

Something isn't right
He's not who I think of
My mind's on someone else
One who I used to love

Something isn't right
I should let my past go
So we can both move on
So our loves can grow

Something isn't right
I just can't let that be
How can it be possible
For my past to still mean the world for me? [comments] => 7 [counter] => 187 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Kie-Kie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Something Isn't Right

Contributed by Kie-Kie on Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 06:12:21 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Something isn't right
What could it be?
I should just be happy
Not full of misery

Something isn't right
It's tearing me apart
Could it be my family?
Or matters of the heart?

Something isn't right
Why is my mind so dim?
Shouldn't I be happy?
Shouldn't I think of him?

Something isn't right
He's not who I think of
My mind's on someone else
One who I used to love

Something isn't right
I should let my past go
So we can both move on
So our loves can grow

Something isn't right
I just can't let that be
How can it be possible
For my past to still mean the world for me?

Copyright © Kie-Kie ... [ 2004-10-08 18:12:21]
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Re: Something Isn't Right (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 06:30:01 PM AEST
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You're right Kie; it is. I went through that for a long time myself. You put it just right.

Re: Something Isn't Right (User Rating: 1 )
by Katie2008 on Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 06:30:41 PM AEST
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Wow, I love this. I feel the exact same way. Why does love do this? It shouldn't be that way. *sigh* good luck! Great poem.
Katie

Re: Something Isn't Right (User Rating: 1 )
by Yousef on Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 07:13:56 PM AEST
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A very good poem, but aren't we all feel that "Something isn't right" even if everything is very right?! the idea is so real, we all feel that somehow, and the finale say it all "I just can't let that be, How can it be possible, For my past to still mean the world for me?", Fantastic finale, really is, Keep it up and Good luck.

Re: Something Isn't Right (User Rating: 1 )
by Dorian on Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 10:00:44 PM AEST
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great rhythum, well written, and filled with lots of

ambiguity, u r good, as 4 love, one way or

another it all works out, just keep writting, your on

the right track . . . good luck . . . Dorian : )

Re: Something Isn't Right (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 06:28:17 AM AEST
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love can be sooo confusing, it is never straight forward, very good write, well written and expressed,

pixie xx

Re: Something Isn't Right (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 10:15:08 AM AEST
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Could have written this one myself Kie.
Related to this one.
It is so hard to forget the past but the past is sometimes best left as a memory.
All will become right one day for you will truly find what it is you are looking for.

A great poem Kie

Love Sweetangelukxxx

Re: Something Isn't Right (User Rating: 1 )
by O7NeVeS on Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 02:08:54 PM AEST
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Oh how i can relate to this one!! Great job! Tanya

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