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I look at my wrists,
no blood now, no cuts now.
Body shaking all over,
from the visions; past.
If I build up enough hate,
I could revisit the blood.
Blood, how much will I bleed.
The rush, the slice, I wish,
let my blood flow, again... [comments] => 5 [counter] => 293 [topic] => 36 [informant] => hollie85 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 2 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Scars

Contributed by hollie85 on Wednesday, 13th November 2002 @ 07:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Quickly,

I look at my wrists,
no blood now, no cuts now.
Body shaking all over,
from the visions; past.
If I build up enough hate,
I could revisit the blood.
Blood, how much will I bleed.
The rush, the slice, I wish,
let my blood flow, again...

Copyright © hollie85 ... [ 2002-11-13 19:00:00]
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Re: Scars (User Rating: 1 )
by LJ on Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 03:15:52 AM AEST
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Ah I know that feeling. But I just celebrated a marker and you can too. I one years time I only cut once! Praise the Lord. You can overcome. Nice write.

Re: Scars (User Rating: 1 )
by alternachik29 on Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 08:52:39 AM AEST
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Hey, just wanted to let you know that ive been where youve been and i know what its like. and you can overcome anything, i did.

Alternachik29

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Re: Scars (User Rating: 1 )
by crucifixioncross on Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 10:10:31 AM AEST
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i been there too but im not gonna say everyone gets through it cause i didnt really but either way i dont really like to see people doing it...i know i do it myself but its just sometimes i get so upset and i just want to die and i go the knife and build my anger and tears and cut and cut and cut but noone comes to see why im screaming in pain over and over again its just so hard to live this ***** up life and knowing theres aothers like you is sort of a comfort so thanks for the write although the meaing was much more important than the words

Re: Scars (User Rating: 1 )
by Dark_Angel_BabAy on Sunday, 17th November 2002 @ 01:29:41 PM AEST
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Your poem is beautiful, I know how you feel, I have been there many times myself, good luck hun.

Re: Scars (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 05:54:21 AM AEST
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again, extremely powerful.
quitting cutting is one of the most hardest things!
it's so much easier to gie into it, but then people start judging you because they don't under stand you or cutting at all! ... am i right? well, that's what it's like for me any way!

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