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Array ( [sid] => 66202 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Chase Your Mind [time] => 2004-10-05 12:19:57 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Back to the beginning.
Stop - rewind, back to the beginning again
Relive that very first, worst nightmare
Keep trying to slice through that vein
(And the blade cuts deep, but not as deep as the pain)

And this time the pain's here to stay
And the rain's come out to play (again)
Stifled breaths, and dancing, in this masochistic way
Persue the fraying edge of your world, again
Throw everything out of proportion

Smear the bloodied tears across your face
Throw your head down in shame; disgrace
Disregard every reason to enjoy life today, everyday
Everything to lose, nothing to gain (again)
Smudge everything into distortion

Chase every inch of sanity away [comments] => 11 [counter] => 188 [topic] => 13 [informant] => afraid_of_fear [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Chase Your Mind

Contributed by afraid_of_fear on Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 12:19:57 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Back to the beginning.
Stop - rewind, back to the beginning again
Relive that very first, worst nightmare
Keep trying to slice through that vein
(And the blade cuts deep, but not as deep as the pain)

And this time the pain's here to stay
And the rain's come out to play (again)
Stifled breaths, and dancing, in this masochistic way
Persue the fraying edge of your world, again
Throw everything out of proportion

Smear the bloodied tears across your face
Throw your head down in shame; disgrace
Disregard every reason to enjoy life today, everyday
Everything to lose, nothing to gain (again)
Smudge everything into distortion

Chase every inch of sanity away

Copyright © afraid_of_fear ... [ 2004-10-05 12:19:57]
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Re: Chase Your Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 12:22:47 PM AEST
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a very intresting dark write,I really liked this one,

pixie xx

Re: Chase Your Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by valentine on Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 02:05:10 PM AEST
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This is almost maddening . . dusky and overcast.
An extremely good write.

Re: Chase Your Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by valentine on Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 02:05:45 PM AEST
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This is almost maddening . . dusky and overcast.
An extremely good write.

~*~ Valentine ~*~

. . .Rose.

Re: Chase Your Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by Pyrofungus on Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 03:27:42 PM AEST
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bad ass man bad ass...you did a great job...very interesting in how you wrote it...i loved it bro!

please comment on my work too
summer

Re: Chase Your Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 06:36:09 PM AEST
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excellent write. keep it up.

Re: Chase Your Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 02:13:36 AM AEST
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awesome, i love it!

Re: Chase Your Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 07:06:51 AM AEST
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Awesome poem, was freaky read, but well worth it.

Re: Chase Your Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by Hoots on Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 03:25:54 AM AEST
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I don't even know what to say about that one...i'm speechless. That was amazing. It was so deep and intense...I was just like WOAH. I think I'm gonna look up what poems you've put on this site and read them cuz this one is sooooo good.
Krystle

Re: Chase Your Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 04:36:56 PM AEST
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damn girl. wow. this was powerful. loved how its written and the feelings it expresses. loved this write char. 5 stars
Becky

Re: Chase Your Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 05:08:27 PM AEST
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(And the blade cuts deep, but not as deep as the pain)
A wonderful, gripping poem and the above
line was so true. I loved it all and the last line
really summed up the poem beautifully. Once
again I loved this... thnx for sharing.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Chase Your Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Skin on Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 01:22:10 PM AEST
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This was very good, you'd like my latest one i think.
Our styles are similar, well sort of.

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