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Array ( [sid] => 65682 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Beauty lies inside [time] => 2004-09-30 15:40:30 [hometext] => Ah yes, Beauty... No words can fully describe Her. Here is my attempt. Comments very appreciated, thank you! [bodytext] => Twas many a day ago,
In the sweet embrace of the Night,
Where I witnessed the birth of Venus…
Her hair flowing, dancing sensually in the cool winds…
The stars set in her infinite eyes…
Glimmering so enticingly..
Commonly known as the Temptress,
The way she moved, those lips parted as if to receive a kiss…
Temptress by name, Temptress she shall always be…
She smiled my way; so radiant…
She sang the song that I knew so well…
Giggling in the distance,
Dancing that alluring waltz,
Teasing all, leaving them recklessly on their knees…
Beautiful was she, a praised Goddess…
There was something ancient about this Venus,
Wisdom adorning her aura…
All-knowing, centuries of living…
Such an unnatural beauty,
Such a beguilingly mysterious smile,
Like she was hiding something,
Laughing at us all, as we try so hard to decipher it…
She was the rebirth of Mona Lisa…
So close, so tantalizingly close,
I feel her warmth,
Smell her sweet fragrance…
My breath was stolen when she touched me,
My eyes watered as she spoke to me…
“Splendiferous flower, never forget who you are…”
A trembling smile played at my lips…
I stepped away from the mirror,
My reflection smiling back…
“I am Beauty... I am Blood Flower...”


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Beauty lies inside

Contributed by FleurdeSang on Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 03:40:30 PM in AEST
Topic: PoemsonBeauty



Twas many a day ago,
In the sweet embrace of the Night,
Where I witnessed the birth of Venus…
Her hair flowing, dancing sensually in the cool winds…
The stars set in her infinite eyes…
Glimmering so enticingly..
Commonly known as the Temptress,
The way she moved, those lips parted as if to receive a kiss…
Temptress by name, Temptress she shall always be…
She smiled my way; so radiant…
She sang the song that I knew so well…
Giggling in the distance,
Dancing that alluring waltz,
Teasing all, leaving them recklessly on their knees…
Beautiful was she, a praised Goddess…
There was something ancient about this Venus,
Wisdom adorning her aura…
All-knowing, centuries of living…
Such an unnatural beauty,
Such a beguilingly mysterious smile,
Like she was hiding something,
Laughing at us all, as we try so hard to decipher it…
She was the rebirth of Mona Lisa…
So close, so tantalizingly close,
I feel her warmth,
Smell her sweet fragrance…
My breath was stolen when she touched me,
My eyes watered as she spoke to me…
“Splendiferous flower, never forget who you are…”
A trembling smile played at my lips…
I stepped away from the mirror,
My reflection smiling back…
“I am Beauty... I am Blood Flower...”






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Re: Beauty lies inside (User Rating: 1 )
by sandy_poetrygodslove on Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 03:45:18 PM AEST
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WOW AND WOW.. Loved the poem. I can picture how beautiful she is with your words.
You are... just powerful,sandy


Re: Beauty lies inside (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 03:50:09 PM AEST
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All beauty does lie in ones eyes......as they say.......Beauty is in the eye of the beholder....
But, the thing about that.,,the most critical is thy self! Good write


Re: Beauty lies inside (User Rating: 1 )
by poetmarie on Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 03:56:08 PM AEST
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This is so beautiful and the images are very powerful, mystical. Very nice.


Re: Beauty lies inside (User Rating: 1 )
by Nazmythian on Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 04:16:48 PM AEST
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“I am Beauty... I am Blood Flower...” Don't you ever forget it !! If you start to, re-read this poem. A true testament to the beauty you possess.

Magnificient

Nazmythian ~


Re: Beauty lies inside (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 11:43:22 AM AEST
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Splendiferous flower, never forget who you are…”
A trembling smile played at my lips…
I stepped away from the mirror,
My reflection smiling back…
“I am Beauty... I am Blood Flower...”

I could visualise her beauty.
Keep painting the words of your mind
You painted a wonderful picture with your words.
Another masterpiece poetic lady in motion

Love Sweetangelukxxx





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