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Array ( [sid] => 65523 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => HELP ME TITLE THIS [time] => 2004-09-28 23:37:19 [hometext] => I DON'T KNOW WHAT TITLE TO PUT ON THIS ONE... [bodytext] => I THOUGHT I MEANT SOME THING TO YOU
HOW COULD YOU WALK AWAY AND LEAVE ME BLUE
HOW COULD YOU TELL ME YOU LOVED ME
AND STILL RUN AWAY...
WHAT HAPPENED TO TURN YOUR HEART SO COLD
I THOUGHT IN YOUR ARMS WAS WHERE I'D GROW OLD.
BUT I GUESS I WASN'T WANT YOU REALLY WANTED,
SO I'LL LET YOU KNOW COZ I'M TIRED OF UR LIES,
YOU WERE NEVER REALLY THERE
I'M TIRED OF BEING THE ONE WHO CRIES
I LOVED YOU WITH ALL THAT I HAD,
NOW I'M ALL ALONE AND COMPLETELY SAD.

WHAT DOES SHE DO THAT I DON'T
WAIT A MINUTE YOU JERK I ALREADY KNOW...
SHE CHEATED ON YOU...
TOOK EVERYTHING YOU HAD,
NOW YOU GO BACK TO HER,
I GUESS I WASN'T PSYCHO ENOUGH FOR YA.
BUT DON'T WORRY ABOUT ME
I WILL BE ALRIGHT,
REMEMER THIS WHEN YOU REACH FOR ME AND FIND HER
I WAS THERE WHEN NO ONE ELSE WAS,
BUT NEVER AGAIN WILL YOU FEEL THESE HANDS
NEVER AGAIN WILL YOU TOUCH MY FACE,
NEVER AGAIN WILL I CRY FOR YOU...


[comments] => 3 [counter] => 195 [topic] => 22 [informant] => brokenwings [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
HELP ME TITLE THIS

Contributed by brokenwings on Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 11:37:19 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



I THOUGHT I MEANT SOME THING TO YOU
HOW COULD YOU WALK AWAY AND LEAVE ME BLUE
HOW COULD YOU TELL ME YOU LOVED ME
AND STILL RUN AWAY...
WHAT HAPPENED TO TURN YOUR HEART SO COLD
I THOUGHT IN YOUR ARMS WAS WHERE I'D GROW OLD.
BUT I GUESS I WASN'T WANT YOU REALLY WANTED,
SO I'LL LET YOU KNOW COZ I'M TIRED OF UR LIES,
YOU WERE NEVER REALLY THERE
I'M TIRED OF BEING THE ONE WHO CRIES
I LOVED YOU WITH ALL THAT I HAD,
NOW I'M ALL ALONE AND COMPLETELY SAD.

WHAT DOES SHE DO THAT I DON'T
WAIT A MINUTE YOU JERK I ALREADY KNOW...
SHE CHEATED ON YOU...
TOOK EVERYTHING YOU HAD,
NOW YOU GO BACK TO HER,
I GUESS I WASN'T PSYCHO ENOUGH FOR YA.
BUT DON'T WORRY ABOUT ME
I WILL BE ALRIGHT,
REMEMER THIS WHEN YOU REACH FOR ME AND FIND HER
I WAS THERE WHEN NO ONE ELSE WAS,
BUT NEVER AGAIN WILL YOU FEEL THESE HANDS
NEVER AGAIN WILL YOU TOUCH MY FACE,
NEVER AGAIN WILL I CRY FOR YOU...






Copyright © brokenwings ... [ 2004-09-28 23:37:19]
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Re: HELP ME TITLE THIS (User Rating: 1 )
by faith_my_eyes on Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 11:40:38 PM AEST
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How about over, never again, finished, or done?


Re: HELP ME TITLE THIS (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 11:46:25 PM AEST
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I was gonna say never again even before I read your other comment.
NEVER AGAIN!
Good writing.
luv, huggs,
emy


Re: HELP ME TITLE THIS (User Rating: 1 )
by mariano on Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 04:40:46 PM AEST
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if it was mine i would put for a title just one word "YOU..." cause it's all about you (him or her i mean)...

no matter the title, i really liked it cause it looks like it came from inside you... from your heart...

mariano





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