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Once I’ve gone I’ll never come back,
I’ll be lost in the land of the insane,
Never to return to you again.

I can’t go on feeling so unstable,
To cope with everyday life I am unable,
I sometimes cry myself to sleep,
From under the covers I’m too scared to peep.

I could hear things in my room last night,
That made me chill & filled me with fright,
I hoped that the next day I wouldn’t wake,
No more of this hurt I can take.

Can’t keep hold onto any of my thoughts,
I feel manic & very fraught,
Things spinning round & round,
Feel like my feet don’t touch the ground.

I don’t know how to get a grip,
Just feel like I’m about to flip,
Sink right under into a Psychotic land,
I no longer feel reality in my hand.

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Feeling Unable & Unstable

Contributed by pixie on Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 06:43:53 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

My mind feels set to crack,
Once I’ve gone I’ll never come back,
I’ll be lost in the land of the insane,
Never to return to you again.

I can’t go on feeling so unstable,
To cope with everyday life I am unable,
I sometimes cry myself to sleep,
From under the covers I’m too scared to peep.

I could hear things in my room last night,
That made me chill & filled me with fright,
I hoped that the next day I wouldn’t wake,
No more of this hurt I can take.

Can’t keep hold onto any of my thoughts,
I feel manic & very fraught,
Things spinning round & round,
Feel like my feet don’t touch the ground.

I don’t know how to get a grip,
Just feel like I’m about to flip,
Sink right under into a Psychotic land,
I no longer feel reality in my hand.

Copyright Â© pixie ... [ 2004-09-28 06:43:53]
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Re: Feeling Unable & Unstable (User Rating: 1 )
by Lee on Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 07:00:04 AM AEST
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Poet at Industrial Colosseums Unbound
Says:

Verrry interesting imagery.

Have a read of my poem Encouraging Them Meteorite Children and comment on it, if'n you will. I'd 'ppreciate it muchly.

Jolly Good Show!

Re: Feeling Unable & Unstable (User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 07:01:44 AM AEST
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my thoughts are with you Pixie
*hug*
keep writing your poetry
your brilliant style shines
cheers!~

Re: Feeling Unable & Unstable (User Rating: 1 )
by blueeyedevil13 on Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 07:51:36 AM AEST
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Great poem. I've always had problems with rhyming but you pulled it off nicely. I could really connect with your poem. You should keep writing. Very emtional, thank you for posting this. It's good know that I'm not alone in this battle.
Avril

Re: Feeling Unable & Unstable (User Rating: 1 )
by unforgiven on Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 07:56:56 AM AEST
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i really like this poem. i love how when i read it, i can feel all the different emotions u were feeling when u wrote it. great imagery and depth.
i would love if u could comment on one of my poems just to see what u thought....i'm kind of new to this and would appreciate the feedback from u.

Re: Feeling Unable & Unstable (User Rating: 1 )
by Dorian on Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 09:35:07 AM AEST
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Sorry 4 yor pain pixie i'm here 4 u if u need a friend 2 scream at . . . Dorian : (

((((((((4 pixie)))))))))

Re: Feeling Unable & Unstable (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 10:51:05 AM AEST
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Your emotions run deep in this Hang in there it will get better things always do! I keep telling myself that! Good luck Christina

Re: Feeling Unable & Unstable (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 11:04:17 AM AEST
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your creative mind is working overtime, the mark of a true poetess, great write, big hugs, lotsa love, and a shared bag of chippies, nessa

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