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Array ( [sid] => 6535 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => South of Town [time] => 2002-11-11 14:30:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => South of town.
Near the edge of sanity.
Close to your breaking point
Sell what you have.. you won't need it where you are going
Release your thoughts, prepare to be open.

Spirling down
Deep in to the inner
out to the edge
let it go
you are already lost

You see your future in the palm
You experienced the past
You can't change your destany.
You can't change
You can't change

Spirling down
Deep in to the inner
out to the edge
let it go
you are already lost

Now you have arrived
You have met your new self
Hope you are happy
This is you
And you alone
You made it.
You made it.

Spirling down
Deep in to the inner
out to the edge
let it go
you are already lost

Cry for help
No one can hear you now
You are all alone
Anyone that loved you left
You are truly alone now
No chance for redemption
No chance for life
You have arrived at hell.
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South of Town

Contributed by scott23432 on Monday, 11th November 2002 @ 02:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



South of town.
Near the edge of sanity.
Close to your breaking point
Sell what you have.. you won't need it where you are going
Release your thoughts, prepare to be open.

Spirling down
Deep in to the inner
out to the edge
let it go
you are already lost

You see your future in the palm
You experienced the past
You can't change your destany.
You can't change
You can't change

Spirling down
Deep in to the inner
out to the edge
let it go
you are already lost

Now you have arrived
You have met your new self
Hope you are happy
This is you
And you alone
You made it.
You made it.

Spirling down
Deep in to the inner
out to the edge
let it go
you are already lost

Cry for help
No one can hear you now
You are all alone
Anyone that loved you left
You are truly alone now
No chance for redemption
No chance for life
You have arrived at hell.




Copyright © scott23432 ... [ 2002-11-11 14:30:00]
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Re: South of Town (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Monday, 11th November 2002 @ 02:34:51 PM AEST
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When this comes out on CD
i want a copy, Thanks for sharing
this, i really enjoyed reading it
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.


Re: South of Town (User Rating: 1 )
by crucifixioncross on Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 09:59:48 AM AEST
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scott i like dit ubt i got one question is this fast rap slow mellow hard rock or what cmon and leave an author note to tell us the beats and stuff yo cause we hafta know that but anyways i liked how um oh the structure its short and sweet and could probly get you a 3 minute + song and i would like to know if it ever comes out on cd or if you record it and put it on the comp cause i want it well im glad i got to read this asnd thanks for sharing

-crucifixioncross


Re: South of Town (User Rating: 1 )
by Sarah22 on Sunday, 8th December 2002 @ 12:06:41 AM AEST
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keep writing in the
future i like this poem.




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