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[title] => ~Forsaken~
[time] => 2004-09-27 10:30:13
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[bodytext] => ~Realization of this world and all its domination and through a foreseeing vision of tormenting days becomes too much to bare living in death so taken by fear tearing you apart as tears fall with grace withholding each breath feeling it could be tha last to take and by tha shadows that hide your face through these ways finding your place and only to scorn tha day from which you were born hate envelopes like a raging storm~
~Like maggots feeding among decaying meat what was seen depletes tha will leaving you weak while tha heart craves to cease to be forever still your dreams now unable of being fulfilled as love is hindered with no means to mend a silent scream you forcefully as inner pain does not fade tha souls unrest comes in haste for it lies unmade though held not by blame~
~Fate beckons with a sly grin at your sins leading to that of a deeper grave you pray not to find utterance of lies wishing to bind time for a second chance before you die while infinite seems this fight of life to try without no answers given why peace can not reside within and your sight grows dim like of a moonless night having no method for which to defend and so it begins through a darkened glare seeing what once was but never again you are tha forsaken~
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~Forsaken~
Contributed by
LoelIntrepid
on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 10:30:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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~Realization of this world and all its domination and through a foreseeing vision of tormenting days becomes too much to bare living in death so taken by fear tearing you apart as tears fall with grace withholding each breath feeling it could be tha last to take and by tha shadows that hide your face through these ways finding your place and only to scorn tha day from which you were born hate envelopes like a raging storm~
~Like maggots feeding among decaying meat what was seen depletes tha will leaving you weak while tha heart craves to cease to be forever still your dreams now unable of being fulfilled as love is hindered with no means to mend a silent scream you forcefully as inner pain does not fade tha souls unrest comes in haste for it lies unmade though held not by blame~
~Fate beckons with a sly grin at your sins leading to that of a deeper grave you pray not to find utterance of lies wishing to bind time for a second chance before you die while infinite seems this fight of life to try without no answers given why peace can not reside within and your sight grows dim like of a moonless night having no method for which to defend and so it begins through a darkened glare seeing what once was but never again you are tha forsaken~
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Re: ~Forsaken~
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by Ripper_Something_Unusual on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 12:59:22 PM AEST
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YEAH! YEAH!
I like it, I like it alot. As a fellow dark poet I understand the effort it takes to pull something like that out. I love it, the words the rhymes the stucture all workings of a good poet...Keep up the excellent work! |
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Re: ~Forsaken~
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by shelby on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 04:26:18 PM AEST
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Im lost for words Bravo
Michelle |
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Re: ~Forsaken~
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by LoelIntrepid on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 08:08:57 AM AEST
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| ~with no means to mend a silent scream you forcefully *send*~ |
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Re: ~Forsaken~
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by Loellntrepid on
Friday, 25th November 2005 @ 01:52:55 AM AEST
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| ~You offer me your glare and to this I give but a grin without care~ |
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