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Array ( [sid] => 65220 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Love Eternal [time] => 2004-09-26 12:57:54 [hometext] => I deliberately wanted to keep this short and to the point. I believe true love is a blessing to be simply transcribed, and elevated to a level attainable to any, who reach out and accept where their heart and mind are leading them. [bodytext] => I looked up,
my heart in flutter,
from first I saw her,
there would be no other

She was destined to harness me,
keep me from transgression,
through love,
fashioned by symmetry,

Though I may live in poverty,
I am rich in her love for me,
Till death do us part,
everyday it's a party

Some future day,
one of us will transcend,
the other will mourn,
however briefly,
our sacred memory,
soon,
will be reunited,
for love eternal

If I had my life to live,
again and again,
she would be in it,
from beginning to end

Mac
September 2004
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Love Eternal

Contributed by macmcgovern on Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 12:57:54 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I looked up,
my heart in flutter,
from first I saw her,
there would be no other

She was destined to harness me,
keep me from transgression,
through love,
fashioned by symmetry,

Though I may live in poverty,
I am rich in her love for me,
Till death do us part,
everyday it's a party

Some future day,
one of us will transcend,
the other will mourn,
however briefly,
our sacred memory,
soon,
will be reunited,
for love eternal

If I had my life to live,
again and again,
she would be in it,
from beginning to end

Mac
September 2004

Copyright © macmcgovern ... [ 2004-09-26 12:57:54]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Love Eternal (User Rating: 1 )
by Kavita on Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 01:12:22 PM AEST
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Beautiful

Re: Love Eternal (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 01:19:14 PM AEST
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What a beautiful tribute to love. You seem like the type that gets lead around by his heart.
Is there any other way to be?

~Breezy

Re: Love Eternal (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 01:47:48 PM AEST
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Well done,

Re: Love Eternal (User Rating: 1 )
by matts_sweetie_04 on Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 02:30:39 PM AEST
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This was such a wonderful write! Love is one of the most wonderful emotions yet can be the most painful at others. Wonderful write.

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