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I ask myself so many questions
Whats wrong with me, That she doenst want to love me?
Why would she stop herself from loving me?
What did I do wrong, why cant i be what she wants?
How come nothing I do is enough?
What do i have to do, to prove how much i love her

Love hurts me so much
It rips out my heart, and tears it apart
While im left there bleeding, Wondering what i did, Why it hurts
I see now, No one can ever love me,
No one should

I start to think somethings wrong with me
I hate everything about me now, more
I see her past boyfriends,
And hate myself more

Im crying all emotions out
Trying not to feel this way,
Trying to forget the things that hurt me
Why cant i make it go away?

Make these feelings go away
I dont think i can make it through another day
Knowing im diffrent, She wont ever love me
No matter what i do. Dont try
It doenst seem to matter anymore
My heart is forever and always will be broke, cause life
But it doesnt matter anymore,.. So dont care. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 234 [topic] => 22 [informant] => willow_tara72002 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Painfull Love In A Broken Soul

Contributed by willow_tara72002 on Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 06:47:06 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Im crying out of my soul of a broken heart
I ask myself so many questions
Whats wrong with me, That she doenst want to love me?
Why would she stop herself from loving me?
What did I do wrong, why cant i be what she wants?
How come nothing I do is enough?
What do i have to do, to prove how much i love her

Love hurts me so much
It rips out my heart, and tears it apart
While im left there bleeding, Wondering what i did, Why it hurts
I see now, No one can ever love me,
No one should

I start to think somethings wrong with me
I hate everything about me now, more
I see her past boyfriends,
And hate myself more

Im crying all emotions out
Trying not to feel this way,
Trying to forget the things that hurt me
Why cant i make it go away?

Make these feelings go away
I dont think i can make it through another day
Knowing im diffrent, She wont ever love me
No matter what i do. Dont try
It doenst seem to matter anymore
My heart is forever and always will be broke, cause life
But it doesnt matter anymore,.. So dont care.

Copyright © willow_tara72002 ... [ 2004-09-24 18:47:06]
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Re: Painfull Love In A Broken Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by Katie2008 on Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 09:27:06 PM AEST
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I used to feel that exact same way. I would look at my ex boyfriend's new girlfriends and I'd get so hurt and jealous when I'd see him with her and wondered why I couldn't be more like them. Then I realized it's not worth it. If they don't love you for EVERYTHING you are then they are not worth your time. Love sucks, I know. lol hang in there.
Katie

Re: Painfull Love In A Broken Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by afraid_of_fear on Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 12:38:08 PM AEST
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god i can feel the pain pouring from this.. i know exactly how you feel/felt.
such an emotional write.. amazing...
charlotte x_x_x

Re: Painfull Love In A Broken Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 04:57:24 PM AEST
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this was written with such pain it was very beautiful though. Soon you will get over this and see the sun again. I've been rejected many times and I've always gotten on my feet again. I hope writing helps.

Bobo (Joel)

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