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his soul rotts within,
he is capeable of the greatest sin,
if you meet him don't invite him in,
he will defeat you,probably eat you,
and spill your inards to the side ,
when he tan's himself a hide,rips skin from your back!,
you will realize there is no turning back,
he is the butcher,so he does hack,
slashing and gashing all through the night,
waiting till the moon is right,
squeezing the veins ,
your dead remains he feast,
hidden in the darkness the most horrible beast,
he lives forever,off the souls of the disseased,
he craves`a nasty slaughter,
on witch it feeds,
he isnt even a man,a demon of power,
born to the witching hour,
his romance is sower,to the touch,
if you get this close ,you dont know that much,
he is in every dark closet,
under every bed,
he turns into the creature that wemost dread,
the horrific thoughts caught in our heads,
lhe will come to you in the night,
when you are sound asleep you can not fight,
and if you did swing back he wouldnt cut you some slack,
with his chainsaw he would hack!
your legs from your waist,
your chest from your back,
dont say his name dont you dare!after all he is eveywhere,
i can tell you but dont say it out loud;
he is not humble and proud,
his name is mad reeper,
he is a soul keeper!
he needs us to live,
we have formed a plan on how many souls to give,
so we all dont have to die,
dont cry but he is coming for you good bye! [comments] => 10 [counter] => 174 [topic] => 59 [informant] => blackholesun [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => psychoticpoems )

the night before hallows eve

Contributed by blackholesun on Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 11:56:12 AM in AEST
Topic: psychoticpoems

twisted evil i n his skin crawling deep,
his soul rotts within,
he is capeable of the greatest sin,
if you meet him don't invite him in,
he will defeat you,probably eat you,
and spill your inards to the side ,
when he tan's himself a hide,rips skin from your back!,
you will realize there is no turning back,
he is the butcher,so he does hack,
slashing and gashing all through the night,
waiting till the moon is right,
squeezing the veins ,
your dead remains he feast,
hidden in the darkness the most horrible beast,
he lives forever,off the souls of the disseased,
he craves`a nasty slaughter,
on witch it feeds,
he isnt even a man,a demon of power,
born to the witching hour,
his romance is sower,to the touch,
if you get this close ,you dont know that much,
he is in every dark closet,
under every bed,
he turns into the creature that wemost dread,
the horrific thoughts caught in our heads,
lhe will come to you in the night,
when you are sound asleep you can not fight,
and if you did swing back he wouldnt cut you some slack,
with his chainsaw he would hack!
your legs from your waist,
your chest from your back,
dont say his name dont you dare!after all he is eveywhere,
i can tell you but dont say it out loud;
he is not humble and proud,
his name is mad reeper,
he is a soul keeper!
he needs us to live,
we have formed a plan on how many souls to give,
so we all dont have to die,
dont cry but he is coming for you good bye!

Copyright © blackholesun ... [ 2004-09-24 11:56:12]
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Re: the night before hallows eve (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 12:14:41 PM AEST
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Awesome and chilly write blackholesun, this one sent shivers down my spine, the only thing I found hard was the spelling, take more time on the poem and a pure master piece of dread will there be.
All in all an excellent write, will have to check around to make sure no-one is hiding within the shadows waiting for my snores.

Re: the night before hallows eve (User Rating: 1 )
by Hannah_Heaven on Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 12:17:10 PM AEST
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gr8 poem creepy!
i need my blanky tonite!
love han xx

Re: the night before hallows eve (User Rating: 1 )
by Lee on Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 12:17:51 PM AEST
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Imaginative little horror yarn

Says moviepoet critic
The Surreal eeL y'know Feel.

Reminds me of the Ramones' "Chainsaw"
without the love song element.

Well done!

Re: the night before hallows eve (User Rating: 1 )
by Lee on Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 12:20:11 PM AEST
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Also I like the title.

Reminds me of one of my favorite C-D's,

AFI "All Hallow's E.P."

Re: the night before hallows eve (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 12:22:06 PM AEST
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oohh a very chilling and grim write, well written

pixie xx

Re: the night before hallows eve (User Rating: 1 )
by willow_tara72002 on Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 07:10:38 PM AEST
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I loved how dark this was, Amazaing write.
I cant put into words how much i liked this one

Re: the night before hallows eve (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 09:28:36 PM AEST
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great write. =]

Re: the night before hallows eve (User Rating: 1 )
by veenu on Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 01:10:27 AM AEST
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what can i say about ur poem....................................but want to say about poem every line of poem show a whole essat within................
very nice little scary can say much scarry...........
keep composing........
if u can't compose u r a rose,
but without order................
how is the quote ................................u cant find it in any book or site
lover of poem
naveen.........or veenu

Re: the night before hallows eve (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 09:35:06 AM AEST
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hey nice one brittany.
VeRy SpOoKy!!!
wOoO

Re: the night before hallows eve (User Rating: 1 )
by hate on Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 03:14:56 PM AEST
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nice peom. I really like it

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