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Array ( [sid] => 64923 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I love you [time] => 2004-09-23 18:27:30 [hometext] => I often imagine what it would be like to fall in love. What I would say or do; this is another what if [bodytext] => Like the flower needs rain
and sunlight to sustain. I need you

Rainbows after a storm
bring glad tidings galore. I love you

Living, loving, laughing,
lingering in the emotion of the moment
Praying, hoping, dreaming,
longing for the chance
to hold you in my arms

Like the moon in the night
and the stars shining bright. I love you

Like the tree grows upright
and casts shade by its might. I love you

Lulling lullaby
softly sung by
a mother comforting her baby
Hands are holding
first steps unfolding
you don't have to be afraid
I will take care of you

The wind softly blows
perfume tempts my nose
the bueaty of you
is it's own melody
playing on me
captivating
making my heart long impatiently

All my life I have waited for you
hurting grieving wondering too
Now that i have you I won't let you go
honey I love you, I want you to know

[comments] => 9 [counter] => 161 [topic] => 34 [informant] => Archie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )
I love you

Contributed by Archie on Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 06:27:30 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



Like the flower needs rain
and sunlight to sustain. I need you

Rainbows after a storm
bring glad tidings galore. I love you

Living, loving, laughing,
lingering in the emotion of the moment
Praying, hoping, dreaming,
longing for the chance
to hold you in my arms

Like the moon in the night
and the stars shining bright. I love you

Like the tree grows upright
and casts shade by its might. I love you

Lulling lullaby
softly sung by
a mother comforting her baby
Hands are holding
first steps unfolding
you don't have to be afraid
I will take care of you

The wind softly blows
perfume tempts my nose
the bueaty of you
is it's own melody
playing on me
captivating
making my heart long impatiently

All my life I have waited for you
hurting grieving wondering too
Now that i have you I won't let you go
honey I love you, I want you to know





Copyright © Archie ... [ 2004-09-23 18:27:30]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: I love you (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 06:50:58 PM AEST
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That is a very close description of true love. You are on the right track. Beautiful poem.

Rita


Re: I love you (User Rating: 1 )
by Elena on Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 07:21:33 PM AEST
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Very soft and sweet, I can only hope your dream comes true.

E


Re: I love you (User Rating: 1 )
by Dorian on Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 07:41:55 PM AEST
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Beautiful poem . . . Dorian : )


Re: I love you (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 10:51:02 PM AEST
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archie, this is so beautifully romantic, hugs n' love nessa

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Re: I love you (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 03:45:25 PM AEST
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A beautiful poem.
I hope it comes true for you

Love Sweetangelukxxxx


Re: I love you (User Rating: 1 )
by SocialMisfit on Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 12:50:43 PM AEST
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wow man i love this!!! this poem is awsome i love your style and was a very enjoyable read, 3 times in a row, lol gj.

SM


Re: I love you (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 08:53:25 AM AEST
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This is so beautifully captivating, I was mezmerized by every word, and astounded by the love that virtually flowed from the overall write....Loved the way this song just seem to flow with its own energy, awesome.


Re: I love you (User Rating: 1 )
by Lee on Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 05:59:37 AM AEST
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Poet at Inustrial Colosseums Unbound
Says:

This poem just oozes with creativity!

Well organized thoughts in a unique combination layout of rhymed verse and free verse.

A bright and shining gem!

Jolly Good Show!


Re: I love you (User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 06:28:14 AM AEST
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your love is captivating
written from your heart
cheers!~




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