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i hate this game
you wonder who you blame
its such a shame

this was a wonderful place
wonderful place it was until i saw your face
everyone wonders why she stays
this was a wonderful place

(chorus)
wonderful being dead
i've lost my bloodied head
wonderful being dead
you're still sleeping in my boodied bed
wonderful being dead

do you know how it feels
do you know what its like
not to feel your life
not to know lifes deals

i feel no pain
but i feel the rain
pouring down from my eyes
then i realize i feel my cries

(chorus)
wonderful being dead
i've lost my bloodied head
wonderful being dead
you're still sleeping in my boodied bed
wonderful being dead

i'm sleeping in my grave
did you know i'm brave
i'm glad i've left instead of stayed
do you know who i blame [comments] => 3 [counter] => 148 [topic] => 48 [informant] => savedbydeath [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Wonderful being Dead

Contributed by savedbydeath on Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 09:15:53 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

its such a shame
i hate this game
you wonder who you blame
its such a shame

this was a wonderful place
wonderful place it was until i saw your face
everyone wonders why she stays
this was a wonderful place

(chorus)
wonderful being dead
i've lost my bloodied head
wonderful being dead
you're still sleeping in my boodied bed
wonderful being dead

do you know how it feels
do you know what its like
not to feel your life
not to know lifes deals

i feel no pain
but i feel the rain
pouring down from my eyes
then i realize i feel my cries

(chorus)
wonderful being dead
i've lost my bloodied head
wonderful being dead
you're still sleeping in my boodied bed
wonderful being dead

i'm sleeping in my grave
did you know i'm brave
i'm glad i've left instead of stayed
do you know who i blame

Copyright © savedbydeath ... [ 2004-09-21 21:15:53]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Wonderful being Dead (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 10:12:59 PM AEST
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yourself? loved this. =]

Re: Wonderful being Dead (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 07:38:56 AM AEST
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The lyrics rymed well, and the overall write I found very catchy, although a little more attention to the spelling and this write would rock.
Thanks for sharing an awesome talent

Re: Wonderful being Dead (User Rating: 1 )
by Stonedraider23 on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 09:02:10 PM AEST
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good write but how can u watch if your head rolled away lol good song tho

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