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Array ( [sid] => 64328 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Clouds & The Sun [time] => 2004-09-19 12:10:23 [hometext] => something a bit different, enjoy....... [bodytext] => The white, fluffy clouds & the yellow sun,
Play chase in the sky & have all kinds of fun,
The clouds float all around, sun gives chase,
He ends up puffing & panting can’t keep up the pace.

The young clouds giggle as the sun has to have a rest,
He tells them that he has done his very best,
But he is just too old & his running days are over,
He laughs & says “just you wait until you’re older”

They ask the sun just how old he is, so he laughs,
I was a good old age when your mum gave you baths,
For an eternity I have paced up & down these skies,
I have witnessed & heard so many laughs & cries.

I wish I could turn back time & be young again,
But for me old age has long taken hold of my reins,
I love to watch you youngsters laughing each day,
I just wish I could keep up when you ask me to play.

Where is your wife? asks one of the cheeky clouds,
Sun sighs deeply then replies she is no longer around,
I met my wife a lifetime ago but she was taken from me,
Since that fateful day I have never felt truly free.

At night when I hide behind your cover I don’t sleep,
I try as I might ,but all my heart wants to do is to weep,
Oh clouds I miss her every single second of the hour,
She was so beautiful to me, she was my precious flower.







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The Clouds & The Sun

Contributed by pixie on Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 12:10:23 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



The white, fluffy clouds & the yellow sun,
Play chase in the sky & have all kinds of fun,
The clouds float all around, sun gives chase,
He ends up puffing & panting can’t keep up the pace.

The young clouds giggle as the sun has to have a rest,
He tells them that he has done his very best,
But he is just too old & his running days are over,
He laughs & says “just you wait until you’re older”

They ask the sun just how old he is, so he laughs,
I was a good old age when your mum gave you baths,
For an eternity I have paced up & down these skies,
I have witnessed & heard so many laughs & cries.

I wish I could turn back time & be young again,
But for me old age has long taken hold of my reins,
I love to watch you youngsters laughing each day,
I just wish I could keep up when you ask me to play.

Where is your wife? asks one of the cheeky clouds,
Sun sighs deeply then replies she is no longer around,
I met my wife a lifetime ago but she was taken from me,
Since that fateful day I have never felt truly free.

At night when I hide behind your cover I don’t sleep,
I try as I might ,but all my heart wants to do is to weep,
Oh clouds I miss her every single second of the hour,
She was so beautiful to me, she was my precious flower.











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Re: The Clouds & The Sun (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 03:40:29 PM AEST
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ohhh!! wow and wow!! this poem is extremely gorgeous, sooo enchanting, beautiful beautiful beautiful!!!!!! hugs n' love nessa

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Re: The Clouds & The Sun (User Rating: 1 )
by Whisper on Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 03:48:21 PM AEST
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Pixie a deligthful, fluffy write. Good going I loved every word. It really made my day shine a bit this one did. :-)

Whisper


Re: The Clouds & The Sun (User Rating: 1 )
by wakegurl77 on Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 04:28:20 PM AEST
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oh my gosh it s so beautiful it leaves me speechless i dont know how to describe how great it is
Allways sincere
Leana


Re: The Clouds & The Sun (User Rating: 1 )
by Hurretje on Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 02:41:40 AM AEST
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Great work... I do enjoy the sun, but I also like to watch the moon at night... maybe you could bring the two of them together... it would be a LAT relation then, but it's better than eternal loneliness...;-)
Hugs,
Hur




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