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For now I cannot see
My heart now heaves and sighs
'Tis you in front of me

A star's light is your gaze
It shines into my night
It makes my heart sing lays
Of love and ancient might

A tenderness and love
I'd see before me now
But distance is the case
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Visions of You

Contributed by wachumiri on Saturday, 18th September 2004 @ 03:50:57 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

A light now blinds my eyes
For now I cannot see
My heart now heaves and sighs
'Tis you in front of me

A star's light is your gaze
It shines into my night
It makes my heart sing lays
Of love and ancient might

A tenderness and love
I'd see before me now
But distance is the case
I'll see you soon, somehow

Copyright © wachumiri ... [ 2004-09-18 15:50:57]
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Re: Visions of You (User Rating: 1 )
by punkprincess6689 on Saturday, 18th September 2004 @ 03:53:10 PM AEST
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i hope you do see her again

Re: Visions of You (User Rating: 1 )
by faith_my_eyes on Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 07:46:36 PM AEST
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Ok, ok...
you touched my heart with this one. beautiful.

em

Re: Visions of You (User Rating: 1 )
by Pyrofungus on Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 07:51:15 PM AEST
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so beautiful and so sad at the same time...good luck!

please comment on my work too
summer

Re: Visions of You (User Rating: 1 )
by eatfresh22 on Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 10:55:57 PM AEST
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I thought we were past all of the madness of infatuation, my Love. Apparently not. I can't say I'm not flattered, but I won't tell you that I am either, for then it may seem as encouragement to you. (I'm flattered). And I love you.
~Carrie~

PS....YOU JUST SAW ME!!!

Re: Visions of You (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 02:33:22 AM AEST
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beautifully written.

wildejohnny.

Re: Visions of You (User Rating: 1 )
by anitajames on Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 10:31:00 AM AEST
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Sad. I can sense how much in love you are here.Great job.

Re: Visions of You (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 08:28:20 AM AEST
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Ooh..this love ..beautifully touches at heart. take care..
venkat

Re: Visions of You (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 08:38:58 AM AEST
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Your love for Carrie is evident in ur writes. You write with such honesty and so much emotion. Once again your ability to express urself so clearly is incredible. A gifted poet u truly are dearest David.
*hugs*
Sue

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