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Array ( [sid] => 64070 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I'm Fading...Emotionless [time] => 2004-09-17 03:27:32 [hometext] => Please comment...I'd like to know what others think! xxooxx mylastwords xxooxx [bodytext] => I bleed my emotions,
My pain, my hurt, my soul...
It runs down my arm,
Into the drain it seeps away...

I wash away the residue,
Along with a part of me...
The evidence is always there,
For all the world to see...

The hole is getting deeper,
My life is getting darker,
My soul is getting blacker,
As I fade away to nothing... [comments] => 3 [counter] => 176 [topic] => 36 [informant] => mylastwords [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
I'm Fading...Emotionless

Contributed by mylastwords on Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 03:27:32 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



I bleed my emotions,
My pain, my hurt, my soul...
It runs down my arm,
Into the drain it seeps away...

I wash away the residue,
Along with a part of me...
The evidence is always there,
For all the world to see...

The hole is getting deeper,
My life is getting darker,
My soul is getting blacker,
As I fade away to nothing...




Copyright © mylastwords ... [ 2004-09-17 03:27:32]
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Re: I'm Fading...Emotionless (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 11:40:42 AM AEST
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oh! it's so dark and powerful!
i can relate to this loads and under stand very much so i really feel for you in this one, but please don't kill your-self!


Re: I'm Fading...Emotionless (User Rating: 1 )
by Doriens_Picture on Saturday, 18th September 2004 @ 07:51:11 PM AEST
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You bleed all that you feel
And scar your wrist, heart and soul
It runs down your arm
As a tear streams down my face
You think you do more good than harm
But you do not know what’s real
Though into the drain it seeps
It always escapes the whole
You think it washes away
However, you will soon see its stains
That have tainted you and me
They are always in the same place
For all the world to see
That’s its us who are getting darker
As life is getting harder
And our soul forever blacker
As we fade into nothing
We both just have that one thing
That our hearts will never shatter


Re: I'm Fading...Emotionless (User Rating: 1 )
by Hoots on Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 01:22:46 PM AEST
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I'm overcome with emotion. I don't know what to say except that your poem was great and I enjoyed reading it. I kind of feel like this person you described in the poem.
Krystle




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