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[aid] => mick
[title] => Worthless
[time] => 2004-09-12 13:36:07
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[bodytext] => Feeling like crap day after day
Im running out of reasons to want to stay
Maybe I'd be better off wrapped in a sheet
With a tag reading my name attached to my feet
Finding me on the floor, pale and cold
With the bottle of pills so empty and old
If only my suicide would go that smooth
Where I could bleed out on the floor and never have to move
But I fight with myself, I cant leave my friends
I cant make this day become the end
But today is so hard.. I dont want to stay
I dont want to see tomorrow become today
I dont want to deal with my fathers *****
I dont want to deal with my mother, she'll never quit
She brings me down with all shes said
She'd rather me not be here,
She'd rather me dead
Well,
Tonight, I think that I'd rather die
So goodnight,
Good riddens,
This is my goodbye...
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[topic] => 36
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Worthless
Contributed by
xemptydecemberx
on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 01:36:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Feeling like crap day after day
Im running out of reasons to want to stay
Maybe I'd be better off wrapped in a sheet
With a tag reading my name attached to my feet
Finding me on the floor, pale and cold
With the bottle of pills so empty and old
If only my suicide would go that smooth
Where I could bleed out on the floor and never have to move
But I fight with myself, I cant leave my friends
I cant make this day become the end
But today is so hard.. I dont want to stay
I dont want to see tomorrow become today
I dont want to deal with my fathers *****
I dont want to deal with my mother, she'll never quit
She brings me down with all shes said
She'd rather me not be here,
She'd rather me dead
Well,
Tonight, I think that I'd rather die
So goodnight,
Good riddens,
This is my goodbye...
Copyright ©
xemptydecemberx
... [
2004-09-12 13:36:07]
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Re: Worthless
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by sober_punk on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 01:41:04 PM AEST
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| u have talent no matter what drives it,its talent.ur not worthless u deserve better,ur talented stay alive so i can read more................ps. i'll kill ur dad |
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Re: Worthless
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by Chanti on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 01:41:29 PM AEST
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Beautiful write - you are definitely not worthless, no one is. Hang in there
-Chanti |
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Re: Worthless
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by pixie on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 01:48:35 PM AEST
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this is not a write from someone who is worthless, you have a heart and can be hurt, as you surley have ben tpo write such a pained poem *hugs*
keep smiling,
pixie xx
you are not alone |
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Re: Worthless
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by AspenGlow on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 01:53:20 PM AEST
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Excellent poem.
Some days I sit and fret to myself, no friends, no one to love........except my hero, and my furry angles sitting in my lap......so then I start to wonder.......oh well guess for today and tomorrow.......not a dirt nap.
Keep the faith in yourself, and keep writing those wonderful words, read and much appreciated. |
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Re: Worthless
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by deathdrop on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 02:10:11 PM AEST
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oh, please don't go!
i know i'm a stranger to you,so this might not even touch you, but please!!!!
DON'T KILL YOUR-SELF! |
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Re: Worthless
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by kyletycz on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 03:46:38 PM AEST
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wonderful write, its good to see somone with talent use that tallent, but its even more sad when someone with that talent throws it away from lack of self confidence, people need to be strong and not fall into the darkness when it tries to envelope them, so stay in the light, and use your talent for the betterment of others lives, because the one best thing you can do in life, is make others lives better.....
l8r
Ninja Tycz |
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Re: Worthless
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by EmoDCgirl36 on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 04:03:18 PM AEST
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| I really liked this poem. |
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Re: Worthless
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by XxNights_ChildxX on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 06:04:04 PM AEST
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this is expressed so wunderfully, quite amazing! but i do hope things clear up for you, i hope u dont stay feeling like this, take care of yourself, ur a great writer, it would be a great loss to the world for you to leave us so dont okies!!?? happy thoughts member!
God Bless |
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Re: Worthless
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 10:17:53 PM AEST
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| i can really understand where you are coming from. ive felt this way before too. so trust me, youre not alone. and ive gotten alot better. plz, keep the faith. things will get better. even if it doesnt seem like it now. God Bless! |
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Re: Worthless
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by eyesxcriedxout1989 on
Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 08:00:18 PM AEST
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| Very good write, though depressing, I know how you feel, but never ever ever give in to your thoughts. And no matter what you may think, your mom doesn't want you dead...she loves you and you should know that. Well very good, keep it up, and don't give up |
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Re: Worthless
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by TwEeK on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 01:50:02 PM AEST
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i agree with sober_punk. you do have talent, and plenty of it! keep writing..each day moves on.
ps: if he's gonna kill your dad, then i'll kill your mom.
keep on smile'n =D
Tweek |
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Re: Worthless
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by bite_me on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 09:32:36 PM AEST
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aww thats very nicely written, you have a lot of talent. I kinda undestand how you feel, deppression is the wrost thing! :(.. hope ur ok, please don't kill your self, im here if you ever want to talk!
be safe
Love Ella
xXx |
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Re: Worthless
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by screwup on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 04:12:09 PM AEST
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Jaque~
this is an extremely sad write I can relate to a lot... you have so much talent... this is such an awesome poem... please stay here with me... I really need you around... cause I connect so good with you, and cause we had to meet this way for some reason... keep writing, and I'll keep reading...
~Deanna |
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Re: Worthless
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by kidpoet_213 on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 05:10:36 PM AEST
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Jacque...
1st thing... U'RE NOT WORTHLESS! No matter what anybody says... NO ONE IS WORTHLESS my friend! U have such a talent... don't let that slip away,,, b/c of what someone keeps telling u!!! Cuz... I almost did! I wouldn't have met u or Deanna if it had not been for Helen encouraging me to write again...
U got the gift girl... so therefore ur not worthless... the ppl who tell u such things maybe but ur not... hold ur head up and keep going in life... there's an end tothe tunnel somewhere up ahead and then u'll see the light and a clear day and all the good in life not the bad!
Love ya... take care...
~Donna~ |
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