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Array ( [sid] => 62751 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => what they do [time] => 2004-09-06 11:31:18 [hometext] => about a girl at my school please comment [bodytext] => On the outside she may seem happy enough
No worries,No troubles, No fears
But look a little closer
You'll see shes struggling to hide her tears
This carefree girl is not so carefree
On the inside
Shes lonely and sad
Shes being picked on and teased by bullies
Who make her life so bad
She gets taunted and teased where ever she goes
By people who dont really care
Just because shes different?
Everyone stops and stares
Her school days are unhappy
And she doesnt know what to do
The people she tells wont listen
She got know one to turn to
She finds it hard to sleep at night
Cause shes thinking about what they say
They dont know what theyre doing to her
why wont they go away? [comments] => 4 [counter] => 170 [topic] => 67 [informant] => vampyrekiss [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => schoolproblems )
what they do

Contributed by vampyrekiss on Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 11:31:18 AM in AEST
Topic: schoolproblems



On the outside she may seem happy enough
No worries,No troubles, No fears
But look a little closer
You'll see shes struggling to hide her tears
This carefree girl is not so carefree
On the inside
Shes lonely and sad
Shes being picked on and teased by bullies
Who make her life so bad
She gets taunted and teased where ever she goes
By people who dont really care
Just because shes different?
Everyone stops and stares
Her school days are unhappy
And she doesnt know what to do
The people she tells wont listen
She got know one to turn to
She finds it hard to sleep at night
Cause shes thinking about what they say
They dont know what theyre doing to her
why wont they go away?




Copyright © vampyrekiss ... [ 2004-09-06 11:31:18]
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Re: what they do (User Rating: 1 )
by Luinil on Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 05:45:43 PM AEST
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people can be so cruel, especially in school-- beautiful and sad poem*


Re: what they do (User Rating: 1 )
by linagalMBfan01 on Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 04:57:20 PM AEST
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people can be so mean and no one understands why the do it. for the past three years i was made fun of it made my life at school miserable. it also doesn't help when the kid may have family problems.a lot of the time they can't help what's wrong.my friends told me to just ignore them but when all you can think about is what they say it's really hard to.this a horrible thing for them to do.and if the bullies could see this poem mabe they would understand that words hurt just as much as being puched in the face or something.

lina


Re: what they do (User Rating: 1 )
by linagalMBfan01 on Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 04:59:19 PM AEST
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i forgot to add that this was a beautiful poem and that it sends out a great message.


Re: what they do (User Rating: 1 )
by Always on Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 10:54:46 PM AEST
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Awesome poem, great feeling and point, does not seem quite done though. *s*




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