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Array ( [sid] => 6274 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Survivals Finest [time] => 2002-11-06 02:40:00 [hometext] => I chose the title for one purpose, my life. I am almost at the end it my time here. Sometimes neruological disorders can take anyone they choose. I plan to be here for all the time God can allow. [bodytext] => I sit alone, quiet yet calm. Time passed and I'm in dream. I look towards the west and see La Pinta.
The weight of the sun sits heavy when it weeps. Missing the children and innocents that have faded to heaven.
The clouds move in still time. Viberant colours shimmer in the evening sky. Stress takes it's toll, my body is weak.
balance is my goal. Seeking my kind of avalon to be filled. The void is deep, shallow is my heart.
Anger sets and pain fills my head. I still gaze upon the descending sun, praying for hope, for a promise of a new day.
Just one more day to live and give. Sharing it with the one I love [comments] => 1 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 19 [informant] => darkkai [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => InspirationalPoems )

Survivals Finest

Contributed by darkkai on Wednesday, 6th November 2002 @ 02:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

I sit alone, quiet yet calm. Time passed and I'm in dream. I look towards the west and see La Pinta.
The weight of the sun sits heavy when it weeps. Missing the children and innocents that have faded to heaven.
The clouds move in still time. Viberant colours shimmer in the evening sky. Stress takes it's toll, my body is weak.
balance is my goal. Seeking my kind of avalon to be filled. The void is deep, shallow is my heart.
Anger sets and pain fills my head. I still gaze upon the descending sun, praying for hope, for a promise of a new day.
Just one more day to live and give. Sharing it with the one I love

Copyright © darkkai ... [ 2002-11-06 02:40:00]
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Re: Survivals Finest (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 10:13:17 PM AEST
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i hope you get more than just that one day.

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