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Array ( [sid] => 62725 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Still Love You (MCKAF) [time] => 2004-09-06 01:34:13 [hometext] => Megan. [bodytext] => I hated you when you dropped me
And when I shattered on the ground
You stepped on all the pieces
I hated you then but I didn't make a sound

I went crazy for you forever
Way back when we had love
I was crazy for you back then
And my heart still beats for you, as it always does

I missed the way your eyes crinkled
And the beautiful corners on your lips
I missed the warmth from my heart
It was the most incredible aching kiss

I was so angry when I never saw you
How I'd wait around day after day
I had all these empty feelings
That were full of things I always forgot to say

I grew stronger with all new values
And I grew stronger as I pretended to be
So very hopeless all over
All over as you still hated me

I remember all the nights I took for granted
And all the calls that ended in just goodbye
I wish I could write down I love you all over
But there isn't even close enough space for it in the whole wide sky

You see I once for you lied to myself
And I once believed that I was
But now I remember everything
And my heart still beats for you, just as it always does

But now, it seems
Alone and sometimes still in the darkest despair
I still seem to dream about you
And I always awake to find you nowhere

I would write to you everyday if I could
But it seems that I have no faith in myself
I learned the hard way to love nothing
But it was you that taught me to love nothing else

In the end I was happy
And waiting doesn't seem so bad after all
I think I will always be there for you
Ready to catch you, if you ever, ever fall

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I Still Love You (MCKAF)

Contributed by Exodus-On-Life on Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 01:34:13 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I hated you when you dropped me
And when I shattered on the ground
You stepped on all the pieces
I hated you then but I didn't make a sound

I went crazy for you forever
Way back when we had love
I was crazy for you back then
And my heart still beats for you, as it always does

I missed the way your eyes crinkled
And the beautiful corners on your lips
I missed the warmth from my heart
It was the most incredible aching kiss

I was so angry when I never saw you
How I'd wait around day after day
I had all these empty feelings
That were full of things I always forgot to say

I grew stronger with all new values
And I grew stronger as I pretended to be
So very hopeless all over
All over as you still hated me

I remember all the nights I took for granted
And all the calls that ended in just goodbye
I wish I could write down I love you all over
But there isn't even close enough space for it in the whole wide sky

You see I once for you lied to myself
And I once believed that I was
But now I remember everything
And my heart still beats for you, just as it always does

But now, it seems
Alone and sometimes still in the darkest despair
I still seem to dream about you
And I always awake to find you nowhere

I would write to you everyday if I could
But it seems that I have no faith in myself
I learned the hard way to love nothing
But it was you that taught me to love nothing else

In the end I was happy
And waiting doesn't seem so bad after all
I think I will always be there for you
Ready to catch you, if you ever, ever fall

Copyright © Exodus-On-Life ... [ 2004-09-06 01:34:13]
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Re: I Still Love You (MCKAF) (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 09:08:20 AM AEST
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Hmm lost me with this poem, sounds more like lost love, than something posted dark.
It had all the emotions of sadness, remorse, and painted a vivid picture of what you were going through, and that I liked.
All in all It was still an awesome read and thanx for sharing.

Take Care Always

Kindragon

Re: I Still Love You (MCKAF) (User Rating: 1 )
by Nomie on Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 09:42:58 AM AEST
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it hurts....it hurts bad! but it only works out wrong becoz its not where ur meant to be! i thort i loved a guy once....and it ended so hurtfully...but now that i've found someone else....i've discovered real love....becoz it's where i'm meant to be :)
u never know where fate is taking u! ;)
this was a very vivid write tho....i loved it!....amazing how strong emotions spill out with words sometimes!

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