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[title] => the end
[time] => 2004-09-05 12:36:36
[hometext] => please comment cuz i know everyone feels like this at times
[bodytext] => this is the end and what am i left with...a knife in my hand and a suicide note telling all the people that at least pretended to care that i was sorry but i couldn't take this world anymore. so what am i left with in the end...myself and nobody else. all that i know that is true and for real is my beliefs and my feelings, but even those change everytime something new and interesting comes along. so its the end and i have nothing...but what does that mean? what did i start with in the first place? the roads circle around and i'm right where i started and though the ride was fun, now that i'm off i feel sick from going around and around. i can't go through that again so, this is the end
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the end
Contributed by
monophobic
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Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 12:36:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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this is the end and what am i left with...a knife in my hand and a suicide note telling all the people that at least pretended to care that i was sorry but i couldn't take this world anymore. so what am i left with in the end...myself and nobody else. all that i know that is true and for real is my beliefs and my feelings, but even those change everytime something new and interesting comes along. so its the end and i have nothing...but what does that mean? what did i start with in the first place? the roads circle around and i'm right where i started and though the ride was fun, now that i'm off i feel sick from going around and around. i can't go through that again so, this is the end
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Re: the end
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by brown_eyez_ on
Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 12:45:26 PM AEST
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yea.....i constantly feel this way....its really *****ty.....when u feel like ur alone....and that if u suddenly weren't there...no one would even notice.....ugh...just depresses me.....:(
(but i still liked ur poem....u put ur feelings into words really well....i'm kind of *****ty at that.) |
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Re: the end
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by Aika on
Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 01:32:59 PM AEST
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this feeling comes with the night
when loneliness hugs us tight
the mornings are wiser all times
look at the sun - it just arised
Yes, I know what you feel like, but even if circle - as life is one circle too, you can find the way out... just look for it, and you find....
With love, aika:-) |
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Re: the end
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 02:37:39 PM AEST
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I must say i've never felt like that. Never have I felt the urge to take my own life - and if I ever did, (God-forbid) I'd think of all those people in the world who are fighting for survival themselves - and think myself lucky - even though I wouldn't feel it.
I appreciate your having expressed this, but I can't relate. I hope you've found your way out of it somehow, and that you write retrospectively.
Keep writing. |
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