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Array ( [sid] => 62336 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Best Friend You Were [time] => 2004-09-02 19:24:22 [hometext] => To Dustin, but we fixed it now, it's all good..... [bodytext] => A broken twisted soul
You have found
You picked me up
And then I suddenly hit the ground

You gave me happiness
You gave me a best friend
But you ripped my heart
In the end

You took away the pain
And gave it right back
Now my light
Has gone black

A best friend you were
Then you broke my heart
A best friend you were
Then you tore me apart
A best friend you were
But depression, once again it must start
A best friend you were
You filled my heart [comments] => 3 [counter] => 376 [topic] => 16 [informant] => imlostbutloved69 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )

A Best Friend You Were

Contributed by imlostbutloved69 on Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 07:24:22 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

A broken twisted soul
You have found
You picked me up
And then I suddenly hit the ground

You gave me happiness
You gave me a best friend
But you ripped my heart
In the end

You took away the pain
And gave it right back
Now my light
Has gone black

A best friend you were
Then you broke my heart
A best friend you were
Then you tore me apart
A best friend you were
But depression, once again it must start
A best friend you were
You filled my heart

Copyright © imlostbutloved69 ... [ 2004-09-02 19:24:22]
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Re: A Best Friend You Were (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 07:25:42 PM AEST
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Best friends can do that, but its also to the one who holds a best friend, that forgets the others feelings........good luck and hope all works for the best. Nice write , tho!

Re: A Best Friend You Were (User Rating: 1 )
by TheRaven on Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 07:32:07 PM AEST
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very good...short and simple sentences, to the point. i can definitely connect with this one, good job.
the raven

Re: A Best Friend You Were (User Rating: 1 )
by essab88 on Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 08:11:16 PM AEST
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nice poem. friends you will make u feel like alot. ive learned from all the mistakes theyve made. *smile*

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