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Array ( [sid] => 62142 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => blind folded [time] => 2004-09-01 01:41:02 [hometext] => i wrote this when i was felt dark [bodytext] => as i walked around blind folded
lies to friends i have spoken
seemed alive but dead inside
that reflected image often made me cry
for every tear drop, there was a sin
when friends would ask me how ive been
id tell them "great never been better"
when all along i was under the wheather
violent storms and acid rain
all my sheets had a painful stain
i couldnt see and i hated to live
but all the tears and pain, i hid
until a friend saw past my strife
oh, dark one. just changed my life
i no longer fear to live so blind
my hand to his and his to mine
i was very weak but now im strong
here in hell is where i belong [comments] => 3 [counter] => 265 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Hakiokusaken [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

blind folded

Contributed by Hakiokusaken on Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 01:41:02 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

as i walked around blind folded
lies to friends i have spoken
seemed alive but dead inside
that reflected image often made me cry
for every tear drop, there was a sin
when friends would ask me how ive been
id tell them "great never been better"
when all along i was under the wheather
violent storms and acid rain
all my sheets had a painful stain
i couldnt see and i hated to live
but all the tears and pain, i hid
until a friend saw past my strife
oh, dark one. just changed my life
i no longer fear to live so blind
my hand to his and his to mine
i was very weak but now im strong
here in hell is where i belong

Copyright © Hakiokusaken ... [ 2004-09-01 01:41:02]
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Re: blind folded (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 03:43:32 AM AEST
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awesome, u hav great talent

Re: blind folded (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 09:58:37 AM AEST
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A symphony of inner thoughts and pain, very well written and let loose, images galore, filled my head as I read, emotions tore me back down to earth, as your poem progressed.
Beautifully written.

take care always

Kindragon

Re: blind folded (User Rating: 1 )
by corrupted_minds on Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 03:49:57 AM AEST
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Great write, your poetry shows so much feeling. Thanks

Love always
corrupted_minds

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