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let the cool air caress my skin.
I see a world without anger;
a world without sin.

Where cruelty is unknown,
and people are wise.
Where all hurt is forgotten,
and no one ever cries.

Where every minute is a blessing,
sent from God up above.
Where every child has a mother,
and the most important thing is love.

Where everyone is equal,
from any country, of any race.
Where people take things easy,
and walk at a steady pace.

Where a smile becomes a sanctuary,
to the person in which it is received.
Where every person is understood,
and everything is rightfully conceived.

I dream of this world each and every night,
and forever think of this world in the day.
Yet, it seems so very distant,
and so incredibly far away.

In this world we can only hope for one thing;
God will have mercy and send help from above.
We are all innocent and want to be saved.
Please give us my world, my world of love.
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Dream world

Contributed by SocialMisfit on Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 01:49:26 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

I open my window;
let the cool air caress my skin.
I see a world without anger;
a world without sin.

Where cruelty is unknown,
and people are wise.
Where all hurt is forgotten,
and no one ever cries.

Where every minute is a blessing,
sent from God up above.
Where every child has a mother,
and the most important thing is love.

Where everyone is equal,
from any country, of any race.
Where people take things easy,
and walk at a steady pace.

Where a smile becomes a sanctuary,
to the person in which it is received.
Where every person is understood,
and everything is rightfully conceived.

I dream of this world each and every night,
and forever think of this world in the day.
Yet, it seems so very distant,
and so incredibly far away.

In this world we can only hope for one thing;
God will have mercy and send help from above.
We are all innocent and want to be saved.
Please give us my world, my world of love.

Copyright © SocialMisfit ... [ 2004-08-31 01:49:26]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Dream world (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 02:10:20 AM AEST
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Very beautifull, it is.
Good work.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: Dream world (User Rating: 1 )
by deadreckoning1983 on Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 03:17:18 AM AEST
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this was a very good poem. unfortunately i fear your dream will not be realized. only when the dead in christ shall rise. keep up the good work though. peace and love,

Dane

Re: Dream world (User Rating: 1 )
by tabby on Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 03:27:34 AM AEST
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Very beautiful and touching, wonderful message in the poem, good job!

Re: Dream world (User Rating: 1 )
by MomentInTime on Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 05:12:32 AM AEST
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Everyone should have a window such as yours...

Good work

Jordan oxo

Re: Dream world (User Rating: 1 )
by AnastasiaN on Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 12:44:03 PM AEST
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that is exactly what I want too, i have a very cynical view of the world and I wish everything could be good as well. a beautiful poem and i couldn't have said it better.

Re: Dream world (User Rating: 1 )
by MissMandy on Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 06:28:15 PM AEST
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That's right Mike, you're good, deal with it! ;)
Luv you lots and i told you it was a great poem!

~Mandicimo

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