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Array ( [sid] => 61909 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Because of You [time] => 2004-08-30 11:34:47 [hometext] => good relationship turned bad [bodytext] => Because of you, I believed someone could love me
Because of you, I believed anything could be
Because of you, I believed I could touch the sky
Because of you, I believed I might cry
I believed it would it would stay like that forever
Nothing would change, not now or ever
That's where I went seriously wrong
Those days didn't last all that long
And yet I wonder why my feelings are the same
Because of you, this love thing is lame
Because of you, I got worked up about one boy
But you treated my heart like a play toy
You tossed it around like it was nothing at all
Our relationship has taken it's great fall
Because of you, I still feel this way
Because of you, there are no words to say
Because of you, now i feel so small
What was the reason i got involved at all? [comments] => 1 [counter] => 153 [topic] => 22 [informant] => minouge [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Because of You

Contributed by minouge on Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 11:34:47 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Because of you, I believed someone could love me
Because of you, I believed anything could be
Because of you, I believed I could touch the sky
Because of you, I believed I might cry
I believed it would it would stay like that forever
Nothing would change, not now or ever
That's where I went seriously wrong
Those days didn't last all that long
And yet I wonder why my feelings are the same
Because of you, this love thing is lame
Because of you, I got worked up about one boy
But you treated my heart like a play toy
You tossed it around like it was nothing at all
Our relationship has taken it's great fall
Because of you, I still feel this way
Because of you, there are no words to say
Because of you, now i feel so small
What was the reason i got involved at all?

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Re: Because of You (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 11:51:07 AM AEST
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A great writea bit comtemporary, but excellent none the less.

I hope that you can move beyond this bad relationship. I know it takes time. It took me forever to see past my first six bad relationships, but I pray you find a good one sooner than that.

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