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Array ( [sid] => 61822 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Morbid Promises Of Souls No More [time] => 2004-08-29 15:32:06 [hometext] => [bodytext] => the darkness of the inner soul
has over run the golden sun
the war of the earth ending
has long since begun

gimmicks of light and truth
are showing us the wrong
the weak are coming out
and defeating the strong

final thoughts of life and death
pass through their thickened heads
never knowing whats become
of all the unborn dead

with battle axes and sabers
fighting off their own kind
they look behind their broken skulls
they notcie whats been left behind

choosing to fight than to live
the move on without the fallen
many years have passed
and now the souls are rotten

living inside bodies so numb
controling the ideas in their minds
people kill themselves right now
'cause the unknown power they cant find

zombies humans have become
to all the little problems
they used to share their words polite
now they sing battle anthyms

falling away from the past they know
their future starts to fall away
they press on in the darkness
and still do this very day

these beasts are called humans
they ravage all the earth
never caring about life
and its minimal worth [comments] => 4 [counter] => 168 [topic] => 13 [informant] => AbnormalPunk [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 6 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Morbid Promises Of Souls No More

Contributed by AbnormalPunk on Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 03:32:06 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



the darkness of the inner soul
has over run the golden sun
the war of the earth ending
has long since begun

gimmicks of light and truth
are showing us the wrong
the weak are coming out
and defeating the strong

final thoughts of life and death
pass through their thickened heads
never knowing whats become
of all the unborn dead

with battle axes and sabers
fighting off their own kind
they look behind their broken skulls
they notcie whats been left behind

choosing to fight than to live
the move on without the fallen
many years have passed
and now the souls are rotten

living inside bodies so numb
controling the ideas in their minds
people kill themselves right now
'cause the unknown power they cant find

zombies humans have become
to all the little problems
they used to share their words polite
now they sing battle anthyms

falling away from the past they know
their future starts to fall away
they press on in the darkness
and still do this very day

these beasts are called humans
they ravage all the earth
never caring about life
and its minimal worth




Copyright © AbnormalPunk ... [ 2004-08-29 15:32:06]
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Re: Morbid Promises Of Souls No More (User Rating: 1 )
by kyletycz on Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 03:53:44 PM AEST
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Nice poem, i liked it alot, keep up the good work

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Ninja Tycz


Re: Morbid Promises Of Souls No More (User Rating: 1 )
by Flipped_out on Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 04:01:20 PM AEST
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Punk...I love you!


Re: Morbid Promises Of Souls No More (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 05:20:50 PM AEST
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this is great, nice use of words, creates a great dark atmomsphere.


Re: Morbid Promises Of Souls No More (User Rating: 1 )
by katyqueen35 on Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 10:53:54 PM AEST
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An excellent piece of work.




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